My first ff... ONCE IN A BLUE MOON

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sapphirose176

@sapphirose176

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Posted: 13 years ago

HI GUYS , its my first ff and frankly speaking its first of a kind m writing something. you'll have to bear me😛

just let me know guys if you all have time for it. don't worry iam not gonna force anything on you guys.😆

m trying something really different and accidently this accident of 'story' springing up in my mind has to be in my 10th std. so naturally m worried how about to carry on .

but these wonderful thoughts never leave me!!😭

so i guess i'd better pen them down on paper.😕

ps- it's difficult for me to keep frequent updates, so i can promise monthly updates at the most. i may update 2-3 parts at one time.

note: all the concepts and the situations are completely imaginary. i written and focused the plot on my perception of our indian culture, traditions and lore.

INDEX

CHAPTER 1 (I,II)--------- PG 1

CHAPTER 2---------------PG2

chapter 3-----------------pg2

CHAPTER 4---------------PG 3
CHAPTER 5...PG 4
CHAPTER 6...PG4
CHAPTER 7...PG 5
CHAPTER 8...PG 6

CHARACTER SKETCHES

CS 1 ...PG 7

Edited by sapphirose176 - 12 years ago

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bhoomi

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow!! new ff? continue soon...

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Ria

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Posted: 13 years ago

voww... :D congo on ur first ff ;) do pm me whn u updt furthr ;)

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey nice idea..do continue..but as its cgm forum so please chose ur characters from cgm cast..atleast 1 and 2

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sapphirose176

@sapphirose176

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Posted: 13 years ago

ONCE IN A BLUE MOON. . . . . .

Chapter 1 (i)

1920 AD

On a rainy night of july, a man walked on the lonely streets. He arrived at a plush Victorian-style English manor admist the eerie silence of the night. He was welcomed and told to wait by the servants, till they could fetch their master. The waiting room was indeed impressive. The man left his coat on the stand and inspected the room.

He wandered till he came to a beautifully carved mirror. Now upto the business. He thought. He quietly slipped behind the door and ventured forward in the corridor. Until he felt he reached his destination. He opened the door of the room and quickly slipped inside.

He looked around. it's the right place. He closed his eyes and looked around. he saw a corner of the room emitting a bright glow. He raised his hand and pulled the source towards him. Aaahh!!. It was hurting him so he himself went towards it. it was a brick. Though it looked as an ordinary one ,he could make out the faint hint of a script on it. clever, invisible to any mortal eye.

He removed a small bottle from the left pocket and poured it over the brick. As soon as the liquid touched the surface of the brick, the script became visible. The man pointed his finger on the script and uttered some words under his breath. The script came alive and the alphabets walked themselves into the empty bottle. The man closed the lid and carefully put back the bottle in his pocket. He looked one last glance at the brick. He saw the visible shield he had created over it becoming invisible. Mera adha kartavya poorna hua , acharya aap jaha bhi ho mujhe aashirwad de ki mera ye karya sampan ho.

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow awesome piece of writing and ur imagination..just mindblowing..keep updating i will defo read it...and wow u added science fiction and a picture of british rule here too..love to read thriller of science and historical mix

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sapphirose176

@sapphirose176

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Posted: 13 years ago

@aru--thanks a lottt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i just wish others read it and gimme their comments. m just not able to pm them because of my time limitations.

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sapphirose176

@sapphirose176

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Posted: 13 years ago

chapter 1(ii)

In the waiting room...

Mr Whitson, the chief engineer and the leader of the project listened indently to his visitor.

"what do you think of me? a fool to believe on this rubbish and crap of you indians? ", he roared in anger. " iam not like you and i expect you to do the same ,mr.bhattacharya. It will be in your favour if you do just as i say. I am not going to withstand this foolishness ..." And so he continued to keep on blabbering with all his strength telling his junior that the indians should be obliged to them and on and on.

Mr.Rajeev Bhattacharya , an engineer working on the same project under his senior, Mr.whitson could no longer contain it. he clenched his fist to control his anger. He simply could'nt hear anyone insulting his country. He was a die-hard patriot. if only i had a chance to ... yeh agar gurukul mein hota to avashya hi mein ise vriksh se ulta latka deta. jo chahe aake ise dand de..!

rajeev's anger reached to such a high point that a glass vase kept near the mantelpiece at the far end of the room exploded suddenly.

Whitson: good heavens!! o lord that vase was so expensive and now its in the ruins. seriously these servants are careless. what do i say to you indians now?

he looked at rajeev as if he expected him to agree.

Rajeev: sir, i take your leave. i suggest that you again consider the case. it's not only the superstition but we also have a scientific proof that the land's unsuitable to lay railway lines. when we're taking about lahore-multan , its supposed to have heavy-

whitson cut him off and motioned him to leave. Rajeev was all happy to do so but was desperate to make him understand.

he left the place and set off. ab iska parinaam kya hoga? kahi mera yeh prayas nishphal raha to maine asankhya jeevan mrityu ke andhere mein dale honge. ab kya kiya jayee...

end of chapter 1!! do comment😃

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sapphirose176

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Posted: 13 years ago

chapter 2

"Tumhara matlab kya hai ki vo firangi nahi mana?? yeh karya tumhe diya haya tha aur hamari hum sab ki ashayein tumse jude thi. mujhe vishwaas nahi hota ki tum kisi kaal mein acharya chanakya ke shishya the. mein tumse baat kar raha hoon bhadrabhatt tumhara dhyaan kaha hein???" the furious voice echoed in the huge hall and in front of the man who literally yelled ,stood a silent figure.

the hall was huge but only 11 people were seated right in the middle comfortably on what could've resembled a less-luxurious and smaller throne.

"Rajeev yeh tumhara kartavya tha. tum..." the man stopped speaking . he was tired and restless. the problem was enormous and he would've betted that none of his predessors had ever faced this problem.

Rajeev/bhadrabhatt finally spoke up," mujhe maaf kijeeye maha ari. meine poora prayatna kiya parantu.. mein janta hun ki iska parinaam ati bhayankar ho sakta hai. mein kuch nahi kar saka" . he bowed down his head and slowly walked out of the hall.

after he left...

a silence surrounded the seaters for a long time until finally one of them spoke up.

" maha ari ab hum kya kar sakte hein? sab uddhvast hone ja raha hein. itihas kahi punah.." he trailed off and looked at the pale faces of his companions.

maha ari: nahi jagdeep. humare rehte yeh kadapi nahi ho sakta. hamare poorvaj is rahasya ki suraksha karte huye chale gaye aur hame bhi yahi karna hoga. itihaas punaah dohrah nahi sakta.

dwijendra(another one): toh kya kiya jaye. hamne hamari shaktiyonse poora prayas kiya hai parantu hum asamarth hai. aysi bheeshan shakti par niyantran pana toh sambhav nahi lag raha.

Maha Ari: sabhi ko soochit kar do. hamare sabhi gurukulon mein aye huye shishyon ko surakshit unke ghar bhejdo. aur ha iss baat ki khabar kisi ko bhi na mile. un firangiyon ke peeche guptchar laga do. pal pal ki soochna humein milni chahiye.

he calls his special and most trusted guy, gangadhar to him and says," sheegra ati shhegra Harshvardhan aur Vikramaditya ko mujhse milne ki soochne do"

end of chapter 2!!

do comment😛!