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Posted: 9 years ago
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Episode 5:

Hi friends!! I just loved ur replies!! Hope I get more supports from you!! You guys are really chooo chweet!! Love you all!!

Our episode starts with Neil and Sam entering the room.Piyali looks at them with her burning eye!!.Sam cried in her heart "God!! Mom looks like an evil now!! Please save us!!".And looks at Neil who already standing horrified.Piyali gives a sharp voice "You guys ..do you have any idea?? What have you done today!!".Neil gulps and looks at her in fear.Sam checks her ears "God!! Whats this still I can hear Mom's voice !! Is it not working??".She looks at Neil and signs him her ears.Neil gets confused asks "What??" In low husky tone..Sam takes out the cotton ball and says"Its not working Neil!!".Neil's eyes widened and realises Piyali saw them.Sam gets shocked and looks at Piyali.Piyali sees them and shouts "Sam !! You can go now!".Sam looks at Neil with her pity eyes and says "Sorry Neil!!".Neil cries in his heart "God!! Today is the worst day !!".Piyali gets the cotton balls from Sam's hand and sends her out.Piyali "So...This your idea!!".Neil says "No aunty!! Sam..".She shouts "Just stop dragging her in all your problems...".Neil says"No ..".She continues"Just stop it!!! Today you made a big mess in my work...I am not gonna spare you...You have to be punished!!".Neil looks at her worried.Sam worriedly waits outside seeing them.She runs to Neil as he came out at last.Sam aaks "What happened?? I am sorry Neil!!".He ignores her and frees her hand from his shoulder.She asks "What happened?? ".Neil says"I am leaving!!" in a low tone..Sam shouts "What??".He says" Yes to US..".She gets shocked and cries "No Neil...I cant!!".Neil suddenly laughs pointing her!!.She gets confused "Are you mad??".Neil laughs saying "God!! You really are a Drama Queen!! If I knew before...I would have betted that you will cry!!!".Sam punches his tummy again and goes.Neil screams and says"Thus little..!!".He runs behind her and says "Really !! You cried!! God!! I missed to take a pic!! It would be more fun!!".Sam in anger starts beating him with her bag.Neil runs to escape.Both
Sees Pyali coming and stands still!!.

Our scene shifts to

Arjun hides smiling.He hears Radhika's screaming and runs shocked!! She shouts "Leave me...".Arjun searches her and follows her sound.Finally he sees a guy hugging her from back and she struggling to free herself...she screams and Arjun face burns in great anger...He in few secs goes and pulls him...gives him a hard punch in his jaw...next second he fell on ground!!.With Arjuns next kick!!
(Wahh...if I am a director...how nice it would be...its ok!! Dont laugh I was just kidding!!)
Radika blinks in a great shock!!! Arjun holds her shoulder "Are you ok!??".She shouts "What have you done!??".She runs and asks the guy "Saral!! Are you ok??".He screams in pain.Arjun stands in great anger seeing them together.Radhika looks at Arjun in anger and wipes the blood in her shaul.Arjun's anger reaches its higher limits as he saw her tears for the guy!!.He pulls her hand "Who the hell is

he??".She says "My Friend!! How can you beat him?? What kind of person you are??".Arjun tightens his grip and asks "Oh really?? If he is ur friend then why you screamed!!??".Saral interrupts "Leave her!".Radhika sees Saral worried.Arjun looks at Radhika and asks "Answer me!!".She looks at him and says "I was just shocked..suddenly he hugged...and you?? Why you beat him??".Saral again interrupts "See..who are you?? First leave her hand!! ".Arjun sees its hurting her and leaves her hand.Radhika says "He is Arjun...".Arjun looks at her.Saral asks "Why he is here??".She with some hesitation looks at Arjun and says "He is Dad's friend's son".Saral laughs "Oh its great!! I just thought he is your would be...".Radhika gives him angry look.Saral again laughs "Ok ok!!Hi Arjun I am Saral ...I am Radhika's best friend!!".Arjun gives a mocking look and goes saying"Whatever!!".Radhika gets irked and thinks "Is he like this always!?? ".She looks at Saral and sees he become normal.He asks"Hey Radhi...can we go to coffee shop?? I am bored !!".She thinks "Bored?? Seriouly He is mad!! Forgot that He is just got insulted by Arjun!!".She nods her head.Both goes out while Arjun staring them from his room.Both sitting in a shop.Radhika sits thinking...
"Why he just angry?? Was he just mocking me...suddenly how this concern..??Is this concern true?? Or again trying to mock me??"

Hi guys how is it!??
Do you saral in positive character??

And how is todays update...eagerly waiting
for your replies guys!!
Love you all!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Episode 6

Hi guys...its again me hateera!!
It feels really awesome that ...I am writing an ff!!! God!! Its really hard to believe and the best part is...I got lovely friends here!!!
Ok this is enough for today I think...

Our episode starts with Both Neil and Sam stands shocked seeing Piyali.Neil warns sam "Dont you dare speak!!".Sam realises something is really serious so she closes her mouth and looks at Piyali seriously.Neil in a low tone says "Just say Yes ..if she ask anything!! Dont say anything other than yes!!".Sam gets shocked and asks "What?? How...".Within that piyali reaches her and asks "Are you ok with my idea??".Sam looks at Neil who is signing her to say yes.Sam says "Ye...yes mom!!".Piyali smiles and looks at Neil "I hope you will listen to me hereafter...I will leave you now..as sam said yes!! But remember...

Take care of you too...".Neil smiles saying" yeah !! I will take care!!".Sam thinks "Whats the matter about both are talking here...this idiot Neil is Nodding to all!! Sure...again he will put me in any worst thing!!".She sees them gone from there while she thinking.Piyali says "Neil!! I know...I was little harsh!! But hope you...".Neil says" Its ok Aunty!! I never mind!! Infact its really makes me feel...someone is there ..to scold me!!".Pyali hugs him and says "Dont ever think you are alone!!! We are family ok??".Neil gets emotional and nods.She smiles saying "Then!! Just work hard!! I am looking forward to you two ..".Neil smiles and searches Sam who is thinking.Neil comes and stands near her "Dont think too much!! You brain will burst!!".Sam gets irritated and starts to beat him.Neil says"Ok ok..stop it I will say whats the matter!!".Sam listens to him.He says "Aunty wants us to ..,join...extra classes in evening...so that we can study hard!!".Sam shouts "What??

Ee..extra classes!! And you said ok!! And you made me too to nod Yes!!! No I cant do this!! I never do this!!".Neil pulls her and closes her mouth.He says "Just listen to me...Whats your dream??".She sees him and nods her head.He asks "What??".She frees herself and kicks him saying "You stupid!! How can I say..if you close my mouth!!".Neil laughs and says "Aunty want you to finish your studies first ...and with good grades!!".She sits sad and says "No Neil!! Its wont work!! I just want to join Mom's works and help her...and I wanna be like her ...so let me do that!!...Actually I hate to study!!".Neil laughs "So!! U wanna me like your Mom!! Then its easy!! You know your Mom was a topper!!".

Sam looks worried.Neil says "Just give it a chance Sam!! I am with you!! Make ur Mom happy and proud of you!!".Sam looks him surprised.She with a great smile locks his neck with her hand saying "Then what about you!!! You too have to study with me!".Neil says "Yeah...thats a worst part!! But I have to do it for you...your Mom..,you know...for her hapiness!!".Sam pinches his cheeks "Aww how sweet!!! Then...you..dont act too good I know who are you!!".Both laughs and says in chorus "From tomorrow!! The mission starts!!".and hugs each other.

Arjun while checking some mail hears Radhika's voice and stands.He comes near his window and keeps his face in real anger.Saral was training her to drive her cycle.He sees Saral holding her hands.Arjun holds the window screen.(Poor screen is dying with his hands!!).Saral sees Arjun watching and waves his hand.Arjun immediately closes the window and goes.Arjun really feeling restless now!!.He picks his lap and goes out taking his car keys...He walks out towards his car watching them in great anger!!.He throws the files in back seat and goes towards his driving seat.He sees Saral gone to take a call and Radhika struggling to drive...she starts losing her control and about to fell.But two strong hands held her waist picking her up...because of the sudden shock she slipped from the hands and both rolled in ground (Exactly!! How in all the tv shows... It just happened like that!! I am sure it too would have shown in slow motion..so we too imagine like that!!)...

She sees its Arjun holding her and shocked..Soon they stops rolling and Radhika on him...She immediately stands and sees his hand hurt!! She sits and screams "You are hurt!!"...She blows his hand and he just staring her!!

Hi..how is it!!
Hope you like it!!

Please tell me if you like it or love it??!!
Eagerly waiting!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Episode 7:

Manmarziyan !! With more crazy things!! Episode 8
Hi friends!! Sorry for the delay...

Our episode starts with An alarm rings Sam startled and jumps in shock and fell down from her bed.She screams "What the hell it is?? Just where the sound is from??".She rubs her eyes and partially opens her one eye.She sees a clock down and swiches the alarm off.She cries "Its just 4 !!".She hears someone knocking her room door.She still not stable..in half sleep she goes towards the door...while Neil enters into the room via a window.Sam sees no one out and locks the door.She thinks "Who is playing with me...this alarm...I am sure this Neil idiot!!".She again starts sleeping in her bed.Neil smirks and keeps clocks around her bed!!.In a minute a clock starts sounding!!!Sam again jumps and fells.She cries"Not again yaar!!!".She runs and switches the alarm off...but soon another clock rings...she sees many clocks there and gets more anger.She picks a clock and is about to break it!! But Neil comes from backwards and holds her hand.Sam gets scared and is about to scream but Neil closes her mouth too.Sam realises its Neil...she cries in mind "Its Neil...Yeah ...its that idiot Neil...I wont leave him today!!".She kicks him with her elbow backward!! But she finds already he blocked the attack.She shouts "Neil!! Why you are doing this!! You said evening classes ...then why these alarms!!".Neil smiles saying "Sam!! Just that evening classes cant do anything!! We have to work more!! I mean..we too have to do something!!".Sam gives him an angry look.Neil looks at her and she really looked scary.Sam just went and sees Neil's pity face.She slept in her bed.Neils nods his
head in disappointment and goes out from the room.He thinks what to do??.He goes to study roomand sits.He recalls piyali's request and holds his head in worry.He hears some hard footsteps.He sees Sam coming with her face full of irritation.Neil smiles and thinks "So..At last!!".

Arjun looks her worried and he looks at her eyes.He gets frustrated as he cant see any tears...just worry...He gets irked and stood in a great anger.She stands saying "Its will pain...wait I will get oinment !!".He gives her an angry look and sees Saral running towards them asking "Radhi!! Are you ok??".As soon as he reaches them,Arjun holds his neck and says in a warning tone "Cant you be with her!!?? Irresponsible idiots!!".He feels the hurt really paining now...and he cant speak anymore..because Radhika is staring him as a enemy there.He leaves Sarals neck and starts walking away.Radhika looks at him worried.Saral asks "Hey !!just answer me!! You ok na??".Radhika still seeing Arjun gets out from the thoughts and says "Yeah!! I am ok...!!".Saral smiles and says"Thank God!! You are ok!!! Otherwise I cant answer your dad!!".She too smiles.Saral asks "Then y that...whats his name!??".She looks him sitting in car and cant drive.She shouts "Arjun!!".Both Saral and Arjun sees her.Saral wonders "I just asked...why she is shouting??".Arjun sees her running towards him ...hides his smiles giving a fake angry look.She opens the door and sits in.He gets stunned as she sat inside her car.She searches something.He asks "What?? ...what you are searching/?".She smiles taking the First Aid box and says "This!!".Arjun snatches it from her saying "I dont need it!!".She looks his eyes and says "But your face shows your pain!! Give that!!I will treat it!!".He again about to scold but she takes a plaster and pastes over his mouth!!. Which gave him a damn shock!!!.(Me too!! Not planned guys...its just came!! As I got more involved!! Usually I too dont like talking blaw blaw blaw!! So I hate those useless anger!! It always destroys next sweet moments!!) she sees him trying to remove the blaster.She warns him showing scissors "Dont you dare!!!".Arjun still in a great shock in her cute character. She nurses it saying "I hate those angry face always!!".She wipes the blood and hears his scream.She gives him a caring look and says "So!! Its paining!! U were acting...as a superman or whatever!! Just show your pain ...Your crown wont fell down King!!".She closes the box and says "Now its done!! Lets remove this!!".She tries to remove the plaster but he holds her hand.He removes it and says "Show your pain to others !! Your crown too wont fall down Queen!!"and leaves her hand.She looks at him puzzled and gets down.Arjun smiles and says "All those advices are for others!!!".And leaves.She gets thinking and wonders"How he said that!! How he knows me??".And looks he left already.She still thinking gets a call.She takes the call and says "Yes Mam!!".On other side a lady asks her to train her daughter for final exams... As she too same batch...Radhika says "Yeah Its my pleasure Mam!! Anything for you!! You are my role model Mam!! Just tell me to do as you say!! Please dont request to me!!".She says "Yes Mam!! I will meet her tomorrow in my home!!".And ends the call smilingly.Again gets thinking and sees the gate...

Hai friends!!

How is it!! Hope you like it!!
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Episode 8:

Manmarziyan !! With more crazy things!!
Hi friends!! Hope you guessed my next episode!!...Our episode starts with Sam tries to sleep but Neil's poor face came before her eyes.She gets irritated as she cant sleep now.She geys out from bed and starts walking out.She says in an angry voice but in low tone "Where this idiot went now!! After waking me!!".She sees bright light turned on in Study room and cries in her heart "Study room!!?? God!! Please save me from this Neil!!!He...he is killing me!!".She walks with her hard footsteps and sits opposite to Neil.She laughed great in her heart as Neil face really looked scared!!!.She takes a book and starts flipping the pages in anger.She sees Neil smiling and asks "What is that funny here??".Neil controls his laughter and says "No...Nothing Sam..Just thought something...you study na!!".She closes the book with loud noise and stares him angryly.Neil really gets more laughter and laughs loud!! She folds her both hands and stares him again!!.Neil stops himself somewhat and points her book.She looks and wonders "Why he is smiling?? Whats with this book??".She sees its Statistics and gets shocked.Neil says "Actually..,We already finished that subject Sam..",Sam sees him angryly.While he struggles to react.Sam too suddenly laughed forgetting her anger...Both starts laughing badly!!.Piyali comes getting ready and calls Sam.Sam comes running in stairs "Yes Mom!!".She jumps and hugs asking "Wow !! Mom...you are cool in this saree!!".Piyali smiles and checks herself saying "Really!! Mmm..yeah!! Its looking cool on me!!".Sam smiles and starts asking hesitantly "Mom...is it important??".Piyali still checking herself asks"What baby??".Sam gulos and says "Evening classes...".Piyali understands and turns giving angry look.Sam asks holding her hands "Mom please...I will study hard Mom...Neil will help me in studying...Please...".Piyali pats her shoulder and says "Dont worry baby!! It wont be that bad!!".Sam again starts saying "Mom...".Piyali interrupts her asking"Just stop it Sam!! I am sure you would get happy after this classes...Till then you have to go...and This is final!! Got it!!".Sam shuts her mouth and goes from there angryly and sits in her car.Neil ...whose was already waiting for her asks "Shall we go...?? Sammy!!".She says "Just go Neil!!".Neil drives to college.Sam still thinking of todays evenin class and asks Neil "Are you ready to go there..really??".Neil stops the car and asks"What..!! Where??".Sam says "Oh!! That damn evening class yaar!! O really...I ...hate even thinking of it!! It was easy to say ok...but definitely Its damn hard yaar!!".She closes her face and blabers.Neil holds her ear and says "Sam!! Just listen to me!! ".Sam hears his serious voice and sees him"Relax ok??".She still looks at him silently.Neil says"Just stop it yaar!! Its just irritating me!!".He starts driving.Sam gets angry and stops talking even a word.Neil Stoos at college and sees Sam went out already.He breaths out and says "Who will convince her now!!".

Our scene shifts to Arjun Seeing some files in his room.He gets tired and relaxes loosing his tie...He thinks "It would be better ..If I get a coffee now...but ...".He walks to lazily towards kitchen.He hears his phone ringing and picks the call.He smiles "Hey Sis!! How was the day??".She says "Yeah..It was great ...what about you Ajju!!(Is his pet name nice guys??).He says "Come on Dii!! I am not a kid anymore!!".She asks "Had coffee??".He sees his hurt in hand and says "No dii..".Soon she hears calling bell sound and opens the door.He stands stunned seeing Radhika standing at door with coffee.Arjun says "I...I will talk to you later...Dii".He ends the call and says "You??".She enters in and gives "Coffee..".Arjun says "But..".Radhika says "Yes I know you can cook by yourself...but you should drink this...".Arjun holds the cup and drinks.She sees the mess on his table and cleans it saying "See...everything is messed here.."Arjun looks her intensely and comes behind her closely while she stops noticing him standing so close.She just sees him back still not even breathing.But Arjun takes a file ..but his breath spreaded over her neck and she suddenly felt her heart stopped beating.He smelled her hair...and she too felt very well his tip of nose touched her ear.He sees her eyes closed and scared.He smiles and walks away from there smiling mockingly.She opens her eyes and looks he went and runs down from there soon.While she reaches her garden,...She sits thinking "What he did!?? And...and why I was just standing idle there...like a statue!!".She feels his presence and stands shocked and looks around.She relaxes saying "Thank god !! He is not here!!".But Arjun smiles behind a wall watching her.
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Episode 9:

Hi guys!!! I will go staright to our episode without wasting your time.Our episode starts with Neil stops car near a house and looks at Sam.Sam gets out of the car and stands.Neil gets surprised "Why aunty gave me house address?? I will confrm with her".He calls piyali andasks "Aunty are you sure with that address??".Piyali says"Ofcourse!! Have you reached??".Neil says"Yeah Aunty!! But its a house..".Piyali llaughs "So what?? You go in and just say my name...".Neil nods "Ji Aunty!!".He ends the call and opens the gate.He looks around and sees beautiful flowers in garden and wonders "Wow!! Sam!!".He looks for Sam and sees she too looking him surprised.Neil pulls her near him and says"Sammy!! See how nice this garden!!".Sam sees a girl working in that garden and calls "Hey!! You!!".The girl still doing something without listening her.Sam and Neil looks each other and walks near her.Sam again calls "Excuse me??" and keeps hand on the girls shoulder.Sam gets surprised as she saw her wearing earphones.Radhika asks"Who are you ??".Sam says "I am Sam!! Is this your garden??".Radhika looks at the garden and says "Yeah!!".Sam hugs her saying "Its so lovely!! I like it so much!!".Radhika gets surprised as she hugged suddenly.Sam says "Your name?? ".Radhika smiles and says "Radhika...".Sam keeps her face little sad "How boringg!!! Let it be!! From now you are Chashni!!!".Radhika asks"How dare you call my name boring??".Sam holds her shoulder and says "Hey!! Come on yarr!! I know we met a moment ago!! But I felt you are very close to me...and thought of sone relation between us!!!".Radhika sees her now and says "You know what Sam!! I too felt the Sam!!!".Both starts laughing and sees Neil standing as a stranger.Sam calls him "Neil!! See I got a friend here too!! ".Neil gives her a little amile and asks "So...you got a friend??".Sam smiles wryly and says "Ok ok!! We got a friend!!".Neil says"Hi chashni!!".Sam holds his ear and warns"Neil!! I only will call her by that name!! She is my chashni!!".Neil holds her ear too and asks "Why?? Have you got patent for that??, I too will call her chashni!!".He looks at Radhika and asks"Bholona chashini!! I too can call you chashini.,right??".Radhika smiles and convinces them "Ok ...just relax you two!!!".She sees Arjun crossing them and gets nervous.Sam sees Arjun and says in low tone "Wow!!".Radhika and Arjun too heard her.Arjun ignores and goes.Radhika still giving a cold look to him.Sam asks Rads "Is he your brother??!!".Rads gets super anger abd shouts "No!!!".Sam stunned to her voice's loudness and says "Chill!!! Then he would be your bf!!".Both Neil and Sam starts laughing loud.Rads gets irritated and says "No Sam!! He is a guest!!".Neil says "Then he is Chashni's would be boyfriend!!".Sam and Neil now shared a hifi and laughs.Rads gets irked and says "I am going!!".Sam holds her "Chashni !! Just relax ...ok say...why you were staring him then??".Rads says"He always mocks me ...I just hate it!!".Sam gets very excited and says "Is he mocking my chashni??!! Then he will regret for that!! Right na Neil!!".Neil too screams in eagerness "Yes!! Sam!! Sure we will have a great fun hereafter!!".Sam gets thought of evening class and gets thinking.She asks"Chashni!! Who is that tuitor here??".Rads wonders "Tuitor??".Neil says "Yeah chashni!!! Piyali mam sent us!! Who is that tuitor??".Arjun looks for his car keys in his pockets and curses "Damn!! I left it on the table!!!".He gets out and stops seei,g them talking"How many friends she will have?? Its irritating me!!".He sees Neil near Radhika and walks staring him.Rads sees Arjun and plans to tease him.She says "Sam..He is your tuitor!!".Sam says "He!! This Angry bird?? No yaar!!"and smiles thinking something.Neil says "No Sam!! Dont try anything stupid!!".
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Episode 10:

Todays episode starts with Sam smiles winking at Rads.Sam sees Arjun gone in and runs towards his car.Neil and Rads just sees her confused.Neil asks "I think Sam will create a mess today!!".Rads smirks and says "Leave her yaar!! Lets see what she is upto!!".Sam sits near the tyres and stands cleaning her hand.Neil sees the flat tyres and gets shocked.Sam comes to them and says "How is it guys!!??".Rads bends and sees the tyre and smiles "Wow!! Sam you are really superb!! Now lets see how he will go!!".Arjun comes whirling the keys and whistling.Sam and Rads sees him and they to whistles like him.Arjun stops seeimg them and crosses silently but his Mr.Attitude face still remains.Sam and Rads gives hifi to each other and laughs.Neil stands worried and looks at Arjun.Arjun starts his car and gets surprised as its not moving.He comes out and sees the tyre and gets irritated.He sees Both Sam and Rads laughing and gets thinking.He is about to go but he hears Rads dad voice.He asks "What happened Arjun?? Seems you are tensed".

Arjun hesitates and sees the tyre.Rads sees his dad with Arjun and alerts Them silently"Sam!! Neil!! We have to run now!!".Neil asks "What?why??".Sam laughs and says "Hey!! Come on chashni!! Lets see what he will do now!!".Rads sees her father worried and drags both of them from her father's sight.They hides near a plant.Sam gets uncomfortable and asks "Chashni!! Why we are hiding?".Rads still watching her father says "Because he is talking with my dad!! If my dad sees us...we will be caught!!".Neil asks "How chashni?? He does not even know we done that ..right??".Rads realises it and relaxes "Oh...actually I totally forgot that!!".Sam laughs saying "So?? You are scared seeing your father!!".Rads father asks Arjun to take his car.Arjun thinks to deny but says ok..as he has some important meeting today.Rads hears her fathers call for her and runs to him without thinking anything.Arjun looks her stunned as she is looking full of fear in her face.He thinks "Is any Terrorist called her?? Why she is scares to the core??".Her dad says "Radhu...bring our car key to Arjun!! His car is flat tyred.."

Radhika sees Arjun and his car tyre.She goes immediately and comes in few secs and gives the key.Arjun sees her restless and thinks "Is she really like this always?? No..I just then found her good..but what happened now? Complete contro...".He sees her father and thinks "Uncle too is not looking like Hitler...then whats her problem??".Arjun goes from there and turns while walking and expects she too will turn.To his great disappointment she walked with her father not even looking at her father.She just went bowed her head down and nodding her head ..nothing more!!.

While Radsasks her dad hesitantly "Dad...".He asks "Tell me Radhu..".She hesitantly says "You know Piyali Mam...sje..".He stops her says "Hmm yes...".She says "She sent her daughter here to...".He says "For what??".She says "She too my batch Dad...so she ..wants me to help her daught...".He surprisingly says "Oh..thats good...Go head Radhu!!".He then walks in.Radhika still in that surprise shock as she really didn't expected his immediate approval.(Yeah...she is right...her dad never allowed her to talk with anyone that easily...but he too knew that she was in bad mood as she didnt wrote her previous exam well...so he doesnt want her to tensed about it...however..its about studies...he has big belief on her in studies...so he agreed easily!!).

Rads still in great shock walks to Sam and Neil and hugs them saying"Oh my God!! Is thus true?? Dad said ok!!".Sam and Neil puzzled abd asks "Ok?? for what??".Radhika says "For what?? Stupids for your tuition!!".Neil asks "isnt he your father?? ".Radhika looks at him and samiles nodding.He continues "Then why he wants to permit our tuition?".Sam beats him saying "Stop it Stupid!! He is the owner...so he has to decide..right na chashni??".Rads sees them poor and holds her ears .Both Neil and Sam sees each other.Radhika apologise "Sorry Sam..Neil...I lied to you..".Neil stops her and says "Hey..just stop this funny thing..and what you lied about!!".Radhika leaves her hands from ears and looks both of them and says "About the tuitor...

Its not Arjun..".Neil in happiness cries "Thank god chashni!!! You saved me!! I thought today is our first and last day!!".Sam asks interrupting Neil "Then why you said its him??".Radhika says "I told you na...he always tries to mock me...and makes fun of me...".Sam askz "Ok...then who is that tuitor then?? Is he really nice?? Or like your Arjun...,?".Radhika smiles and asks "Do you like me??".Neil says "Come on Rads!! Just tell me who is that tuitor?? Is he good or bad?? Say naaa...".Radhika sees both of them smilingly...

Hi friends !! I am really sorry for my late update!! I really missed you guys ...
And Please forgive me if its boring...But let me know how you feel..it sure will helps me to think more!! And how was todays epi?..
Hope you not hated it!!

Love you all guys!!
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Episode 11:

Our Episode starts with Radhika saying "Sam ..I really wanted to tease him...so I lied to you".Neil goes to her smilingly and says "Hey !! Come on Yaar! Are we any strangers now?? Why you are being soo formal..just forget it!!".Sam pushes Neil and holds and says "Its ok Chashni!! It was fun!! But poor Arjun!! We teased him wrongly but its fa you na?? So..leave it!! Now say who is our tuitor??".Neil asks "Is he really strict??and where is his room??".Sam smilingly says "Yeah!! Chashni tell me naaa...My BP is raising here..".Radhika calmly folds her hands and says "Its Me then!!".and looks at then like interviewer.Sam and Neil both sees each other and laughs!!Neil says "Come on Chashni!! How can u be tuitor??".Sam too says "Ok!! Not again...This time I wont be cheated by you..So show that tuitirs room!!".Radhika looks at then coldly and says "Ms. Samira and Mr.Neil can you come with me inside please...As we are late already!!".Radhika walks from there with the cold reaction.Both Neil and Sam really get damn shocked!! And looks at Radhika who turns and says "If you have a doubt...just call Piyali Mam then..".Sam really shocked and says to Neil "Neil!! Are we really hearing her words ..?? Or its our dream??".Neil too in shocked reaction looking at Radhika says "Its real Sam!! How can one dream happens to both of us!! Sammy ..I think she is saying truth!!".Sam biting her nails starts thinking and says "Then Its a good news Neil!!".Neil looks at her and thinks.He realises and smilingly says "Yeah right?? I didn't thought of that!!".Both looks Radhika and Radhika laughs asking "Is your tuitor cool??".Sam runs to her and says "No!! Chashni is cool!! This tuitor is funny..".Neil also joins then and says "Still I cant believe Chashni...You are our tuitor!!".Sam in wonder says "Oh My God !! Chashni!! On our very first day...We did a mess here..I really dono what will happen hereafter!!".All three goes to her room.Sam sees her room really Neat and well ordered.She says "So..We reached library!!".Neil laughs and says "Sam!! This is what a room called!! Learn this too from Chashni...".Sam says "How funny!! I don't like my room as any library Neil..".Radhika comes with some books and sayIng "Mmm ..She is right!! Everyone's thoughts will differ na?? Why Sam wanna change herself??".Neil says "So..You too got one side now".And folds his hands.Sam still smiling at Radhika goes bear her and says "Really I am too lucky to get you as my tuitor chashni!!".Radhika says "No Sam...You have to thank your mom!! You are really lucky to have her!!.Sam nods her head emotionally.Neil comes and looks her and cries "God!! Sam is in tears!!".Sam runs to beat him saying shouting "No!!".Both continued their crazy talks ...
Our scene shifts to Arjun while driving sees Radhikas family photo.He stops his car and takes it.He sees Radhika standing between their parents.But still something fishy in her smile.He says "Why I am feeling this!! Is her smile fake??".He peers the photo for few more times.He gets stressed and keeps that photo.He drives his car and thinks "She has something in her..Which I cant find till now...What is it??".

Here our Sam ...Neil...Really with a great smile reading and Radhika seeing them smilingly.She sees the clock and says "Sam?? Neil?? Ain't you leaving??".Sam looks at watch and shocked "5? ? Already??".Neil too shocked.Sam says "Hmm...I really will miss you chashni..".Neil says "Sam??Don't be silly..,we will be coming daily!!".Sam smiles saying "Yeah right??ok Chashni come on give me a hug for today!!".Both hugs each other and leaves,Sam and Neil gets out by their car.Radhika stood there to wave her hands for them.Soon her dad car enters.She gets alerted and goes into the house.Arjun gets out of the car and goes into his room.He keeps his files ..tab..and looks at the keys.He smiles saying "Now I gotta chance to see you!!".He goes down whistling and whirling the keys as usual and clicks the calling bell.Soon He heard a voice "Coming!!" And gets happy.Radhika opens the door and looks at him.She looks him with small fear in heart.She asks "What??".He shows the keys and enters into the house.She follows him saying "Give that to me..I will give to dad".Arjun looks at her and says "No..I will give myself..".She says "He is not here!!...He went to a function with mom... They will be late ..so give it to me..".Argun in a surprised look says "Then..I have more time !! ".He asks while searching "Where is your room??".Radhika gets irked and asks "Why you are asking??".He says calmly "To see..".She says in a strict voice "I think you should go now!".Arjun finds a room and enters into it and finds its her father's.He then tries to enter another room while Radhika stands before him like "I wont allow you to enter!!".She looks at him like "What you will do now??".Arjun says "You have no idea what I will do !! So..You better stay out of my way!!".She gets really scared but still stands there with her brave heart which is losing its braveness now.Arjun looks her still standing and gets closer to her with a cold look.She sees him,and thinks "I shouldn't told him...so he is taking advantage of the situation..."She curses her for saying her parents are not in home.Arjun locks her in his hands still not touching her.He gets much closer now making her to lean over her room door.Arjun opens the door still locking her.Radhika looks at him in anger and says "What you want?? Why you are doing this??".Arjun looks at her and saying"Wanna Check you out!!" and smiles smirkingly.

Hi friends !! How is it??
Eager to know your replies!
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#28
Episode 12:

Hi friends!! I am really sorry..I know it is not enough!! But I will try my best my dears!!

Our epi starts with Arjun standing closer to her and asks "Are you really that brave?? To stand against me??".Radhika with little courage says "Why??Are you any King to bow my head down??".He smiles little and asks "So..you wanna argue with me..".Radhika looks at him as "Yes".He opens the door smirking at her and goes inside.She in great anger now goes behind him and tries to stop him.Arjun starts looking carefully but keeping his face very normal.Radhika asks "Just tell me what do you want??And...What you are looking for??".Arjun just makes sure he sees the room clearly.She now holds his hand and asks "Stop it!!".His another hand holding a cupboard door.He tries to pull it but its locked.She gets alerted and asks "Just get out from here!!".Arjun looks at her anger and asks "Why you are tensed??".She realises she is sweating and stammers "It...its ..nothi...nothing...you just get out from here!!".Arjun wonders "Why she started stammering?? Is she really scared??".He again looks at the locked cupboard and asks "Are you hiding something??" And watches her eyes intensely...He could see her nervousness...tension..anxiety..everything changed her face!! He got his answer!! "Yes...you are hiding something!!".She looks at him stunned and both hears horn sound.Radhika starts panicking and cries "Dad!!! Came!!??".She immediately pulls him and closes his mouth and warns him "Don't come out!!".He looks weird as she thought she controlled him.He laughs under his breath but still he liked it..as she is standing close to him.She turns to go but he locks her waist and says "Then ..you too should not go ..".She in complete fear says "Just stop this nonsense!! I have to go ..now!!".She warns him with her eyes which said "Just leave me and get lost!!".He says "Are you crazy?? You still threatening me..wait I will meet your father!!".She immediately hugs him screaming "No!! Please!!".He stood as an idol...and he frozen.He prays to God "Let this sec stops at this moment!!".She frees herself from him using this opportunity and locks him inside the room.He realises her sudden move and again stunned.He says in confusion"What are you Radhika??Still I cant figure out!!".He looks at the cupboard and searches for the keys...But he didn't find any keys in.Radhika runs out and checks if Her dad came!! She gets happy as she didn't find her dad!! But to her great surprise Neil came again.He comes smilingly and says "Hi chashni!!".Radhika gets nervous and waves her hand.He says "I forgot my phone chashni!!".Radhika gets alerted and says "Wait here!! I will get for you!!".Neil says "Its ok Chashni! I will take myself..".She stops him shouting"No!! You be here Neil! I will come..".She runs in a great hurry and opens the door.She gets shocked as she doesn't find Arjun there.She sees Neils phone on table and takes it.She stops thinking "Where did he gone??".She then runs out to send Neil first.Neil sees her worried and asks "Are u okay??why you are looking horrible!! Have you seen any ghost??".Radhik a looks at here house and says "Yeah!! Kinda ghost is here!!".Neil asks "What??".She manages and sends him.She goes and stands near her room and hesitates to go in.Suddenly she hears car horn sound and goes out.She really gets scared but receives them with small smile.After she goes to her room and starts searching him seriously.She sits on her bed and says "Thank God!! He is gone !!".She smiles and rests over the bed.She rounds and hugs a pillow and gets suspicious.
Next our scene shifts to Sam who is waiting for Neil.She sees her watch and starts cursing "This Neil na..always like this!! There ma will be waiting!!Why he is late??he should have reached by now!!".She plays rolling a glass to and fro on the table.She sees some goons crossing her and Neil too approaching her.She looks at the goons and really not felt scary but funny.She thinks " Oh Neil!!What you gonna do now!! I am sorry but this will have great fun!!.

Ha ha...hi friends!! Hope u not hate it!! And m really sorry again for my late updates...please bear with me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Episode 13:

Hi friends!! I will talk later..first we will see Sam..who is really upto do something crazy!!
Our episode starts with Sam shows her hand for Neil who was searching her sees her hand.He smiles and goes to her.He sits and says "Sammy?? What you are thinking??".Sam looking at the goons says "You wait here...I will just come".Neil nods his head as he is interested in drinking his favourite juice!!.Sam hides and hears their conversation.She gets shocked as they were really talking about kidnapping someone!!.She gets shocked and runs towards Neil to inform him!!.But by mistake she pushes something and goons gets alerted.Sam slowly in fear turns.She sees the goons surrounded her.She thinks "Oh god!! What to do now??"...

Lets make her wait there and here Radhika
Lying in bed hugging her pillow.She thinks "Where he vanished suddenly?? And how he gone out??".She gets thinking and jumps out from bed.She checks her room everywhere.But does not find.She bites her nails and realises thats a bad habit.She beats her hand and says "Still I cant stop this habit!!".She sees the cupboard and gets doubt.She runs and opens the drawer.She gets relaxed its locked.She then goes and stands near the window of her room where she already over heard while he was talking over phone.She didnt heard any sound.
"You are hiding something, right??" A sound made her heart raised in fear.
Arjun stands before her keeping his both hands in pocket.He was completely scanning her from head to toe (Like sharuk in Ra-one!!).She walks towards table and says "Its None of your business!!".And looks at him very confidently.Her words stimulated Arjun's attitude.He walks towards her.His footsteps heard very loud and really scary in that silent room.
Let them argue for sometime..as our Sam is in danger now.
Sam getting her boldness out and saya "Why you sorrounding me?? I mean..I didnt heard anything..".
One of the goons says "Really?? Then why you were hiding??".
Sam gets tensed and says "I was just hiding from my friend!! See..He is sitting there..".
She tries to call Neil but one of them closes her mouth.She gets scared and acts like fainting.Goons got confused."How she fainted?? We didnt gave chloroform..".
They get call from their boss.Soon one of them who atended the call tells "there is no time for this...so lets leave her here..or our work will be disturbed!!".Others too agree and hides her under a table.Soon they gone Sam opens her left eye still scared and checks really they gone!! She gets happy as they left her.She thinks "Thank God!! I didnt do anything mad!! Or they would have done something to Neil.".She comes out and sees Neil is not there and gets shocked!! She goes and asks some people.But no use!! .she scolds him "Where this idiot went?? At this important time??".Neil comes eating his ice cream and sees her worried.He asks "What Sammy?? You wanna eat??".Sam sees his cute childness and laughs.She thinks "I thought of seeing your stunt!! But he is just a kid still!!".He asks "ok ok Its not funny!! So tell me ..whats the matter!!??".Sam looks at him in disbelief and says "I dont think you will help me with this!!".Neil says "Oh!! Say it na...".
Sam says "Ok !! Listen to me carefully!!".
Neil makes his face like hearing very serious which made sam to laugh...
Neil asks "What yaar?? Be serious tell me!!".
Sam says "Neil, some goons planned to kidnap someone!! I heard them..".
Neil gets shocked "What?? Wait!! Did you see anyone face..so that we can identify..".
Sam says "Neil, I know everyones face ...While they tried to kidnap me too...I saw everyone !! Even their boss!!".
Neil gets shockes with her words and Sam too curses herself to tell him.As he will start giving lecture now!!
Neil asks "What?? Tried to kidnap you?? What you are saying??".
Sam takes a deep breath and explains him what happened and says "See Neil!! Its not right time to talk!! Lets save a person!! C'mon!!".
Neil goes with her.Both gets into the car and starts waiting for the goons.She points out them kidnapping a kid and shouts "Neil!! Neil!! Its him!!"
Neil really gets nervous and says "Ok !! Ok!! I saw him!! Now??".
Sam seeing the goon says "Do something!!".
Neil blinks as he is really nervous and says "Shall we shoot them?? Like we saw in James bond movie??" and looks at the goon carefully.
Sam hits his head and shouts "You are not a cop idiot!! And we dont have any guns ok??".
Neil comes to reality and asks "Then What to do??".
Sam curses "Its my mistake Neil!! Wait I will do something..".She calls the police and informs.
Neil sees them getting in a van.He says" Sammy!! We will follow them!! Like our heroes do in their films!!".
She smiles wryly and says "Atleast once u said right!! Lets follow them!!".
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Let them follow those goons...
Here Arjun goes to her and asks "Dont be afraid!! ".
Radhika says "I am not afraid..." and folds her hands now to build her courage up!!
Arjun looks at her and says "Ok!! Then I will call your Dad!! He will help me to find out!!".
Radhika gets shocked and asks him "Dont try to trap me!! If you wanna call my Dad!! Then sure!! Call!! I am not afraid anymore!!".
Arjun looks at her weird as she become too bold now.He says "Hmm!! Let me see how this face will change..while seeing your father!!".
Arjun goes to open the door but Mala knocks the door calling "Radhu??".
Radhika gets shocked and stops Arjun.She pleases him and asks "Please hide somewhere!!".She said in husky voice and pulls him into her bathroom.She says "You be here ok!! Dont come out!!".

Arjun slides over the wall and smiles seeing the way she gone!!.While she opens the door and sends her mom saying she will come to have dinner..
She comes to Arjun and says in a matured tone."Listen Arjun!! I dont wanna argue with you!! Just leave!! And please dont interfere in my life!! Ok??".
Arjun comes walking lazily and falls on bed.
He says cooly "So?? I dont want to disturb you!!".
Radhika says smilingly "Yes!! That what I need!!".
Arjun rolls over the bed and says "Hmm!! Then I will sleep here today!!".
Radhika gets stunned "What?? Come again??".
Arjun takes a pillow keeps under him head and says "Then!?? How can I go to my room now?? At this time!! If anyone sees ...What will happen to my image??" and smirks at her.
Radhika gets angry "So..This is what u planned!!".
Arjun says "See! I have no option!!".
Radhika gets thinking looking at him coldly...

Hi friends!! Hope you liked it!!
I am really sorry for my late episodes!!
Because..my another ff too in a crucial stage...So please bear with me!!
And thanks a lot for your lovely replies,,still expecting lot of love!!
Eagerly waiting to see ur replies!!
Love you all!!
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Episode 14:

Hi friends!!!I am really really really sorry..
.I couldn't update my epis...One I got Clearly... That's "I couldn't keep my promise". Yeah!! Its hard to keep promises... But still I will try ma best for our Manmarziyan!!!

Oh God!! I started talking again!!
Our episode starts with Arjun looks at her smirkingly. Radhika unfolds her hands and goes near him.Arjun still looking at her.She warns "Don't make any noise...just hide if you here anyone comes in..OK??".
Arjun little surprised "Are you sure?? You are allowing me to stay here??".
Radhika gives him an "Unbelievable!!!" Look and says "Oh really?? You decided to stay!! Just wait !! And see how I will kick u out!!!".
Arjun laughs "Let's see!!".
Radhika goes out and stands near the door.She turns and says "Be silent !! OK??".
Arjun lying lazily just looks at her ...no words came from his mouth..He just ..looked!!!
Radhika gets suspicious and thinks " I can't believe him...If he came out ?? Oh God!!".
Arjun asks "Still u are here??".
Radhika smiles mockingly says " Of course!! How can I believe you??".
She locks the door from out side and says "I locked him!! But sure...he will create some mess!! Before that I should finish my dinner and should reach here.
She walks towards dinning hall and stops hearing a sound.
Ha ha...let them fight later

Here Neil and Sam follows the car cautiously. Sam says " I thought they are funny...but ".
Neil says "What?? How can goons be funny Sam?? Are you crazy??".
Sam thinks " Oh !! He started again!!" and says
"You would have seen their faceels Neil !! Really funny!! No one will believe if anyone says they are goons!! And starts laughing.
Neil gives her an angry look" you na?? Unbelievable!!".
Sam laughs " Ok yaar!! Just chill!!".
Neil gets call .Sam sees its Piyali and says "Someone is in trouble..." She says it in singing tone...
Neil "What?? Then Its me!!".
Sam says" Wow Neil!! You are sooo smart!!!".
Neil gets the phone from her and attends the call.He says "Aunty we are on the way!! We will reach there soon!!".
He looks worried and says "Ji aunty!! ".
He ends the call and gets angry.
He says "Enough of this game!! Let's end this!!".
He takes another mobile from his pocket.
Sam asks "What you gonna do Neil?".
He smiles "No more social service!! We are going to home now!".He raises his car speed and rushes to home.
Sam gets worried" what happened Neil! Soon police will reach here..".He says "Sam!! Lay down!!".
Sam asks"What??"
He pushes her down the seat.
Neil chases the van.Soon he reaches near that van he opens his window and he asks the driver about some address as excuse. He throws his mobile in that van.He makes sure they didn't know it.He waves his hand as "thanks" with smirking smile...and crosses them.

Soon Sam sits in her seat cursing him "Why you did this Idiot!! See we missed that van!! We could have saved a kid!! But all gone vain!!".
Neil take his phone and calls someone.
He says "I will text you what to do!!".
Sam gives him an irritated look and says " what are you Neil!! I mean what kinda person you?? Leaving a live there under threat!!".
He calmly says " Aunty is waiting fa you there!!".
Sam sees him texting something and asks "Just stop it ok!! Mom is waiting!! You got a good reason!!"
Neil tries to convince her but she gets mad at him.
Soon they reach home.Sam gets out angrily.
Neil stops her and says "Tell Aunty I will be going out!!".
Sam shouts " Go to hell!!".
Neil smiles and says "Crazy!!". And gets in his car.

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