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Awesome awesome awesome... . I love it yar... Plzzz continue soon dear... And all the best
Originally posted by: KashishJ
Nicely written chapter.
I could vividly see a cool Omkara with camera in his hands bumping into a confused Gauri.Please update soon
Originally posted by: pt311288
superb update loved it👏
Originally posted by: Naina280599
Mannn!! I can't tell you how I feel rn. I so loved this. This was totally amazing. Loved their conversation and the sindoor part 😳 I have to go out so can't comment longer, sorry! I loved this more than the words explain, seriously. I adore the way you write so beautifully well. Post the next one soon as I can't wait now. Much love 🤗
Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
Sakura ... This is perfection 😲
The way you incorporated the necessary elements of the show's script is perfect patch work ... This will not let anybody lose interest 👏 whether it be a teenager or any middle aged person.So When Omkara loses his memory ... His brothers include the Mrs. In their gang ... You have reached the core of the concept ..."Ek doosre ke zaruri hisse hai ... Yeh ek kahani ke teen kisse hai "Obros in actionShivaay did not let Gauri go away ... Its relief and then they are planning RiKara Milaap. Even when Omkara lost his memory ... You have resurfaced the character of Shivaay ...The best part of everything was how om came face to face with Gauri and how he has observed her in the weeks past ...I love his thought process of how he knows Gauri is innocent and is concerned for her happiness ...This had to go this way ... I am not able to describe the kind of feeling I am having ... Reading this ... Omkara is giving a chance to Gauri and more than that to himself ... For an astonished Gauri ... I know many other surprises are on their way ...I so wanted the story to reshape this way ... Of how he regains his memory learning the truth part by part ...I am eagerly looking forward to how this story is conveyed ... I am very happy ... I actually cried realizing that this was the character treatment and emotional depth ... RiKara as the show stopping couple deserved...Please continue soon
Originally posted by: writergenie17
Your words Sakura... are a precious gift!
You made me feel so many emotions as I read the new chapter today.This is exactly how the show should've gone... this... Omkara waking up from his coma as the old Om... relearning his relationship with Gauri, his genuine curiosity about her, his natural instinct to care about her happiness... this is our Original Omkara from the IB days.Thank you for bringing him back to us...The tentative interactions between Om and Gauri, with Gauri being blatantly bedazzled by this happier, freer and so much more open Omkara, are so beautiful! I wish there was more I could read right now. 😃And the way you've brought Gauri into the fold of the family... the way she's built individual, unique relationships with each and every one of them is just perfection!Again, Thanks for sharing this with us...Can't wait for more...
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