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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

Di! πŸ€— Congo for turning IF rockerz! πŸ₯³ And coincidently hi sahi, i have a surprise for you too! πŸ˜ƒ 😳



Thank you so much Ramya
Surprise for me yayyy
I love surprises
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Chalo let's see what our story ke Praja are upto- Update is here

Chapter 5

Later that very night Pratap glared at the closed doors of his room as he walked towards the guest room where he had been relocated all thanks to the uninvited thankless girl Ajabde. What sort of a name is Ajabde? He grumbled as he fell back on the bed with his hands behind his head as he stared at the ceiling. He knew it was too late to do anything at the moment so he closed his eyes trying to fall asleep - he tossed and turned hoping for sleep to come to him but to no avail. Finally he decided to read the book his grandfather had gifted - The Art of War was a master piece and he loved reading it again and again but as soon as his eyes fell on the first line he found himself drifting off into slumber.

Clink...clink...clink the noises were irritating him so much so that he placed the pillow over his head but the noise didn't stop. Grumbling he stood up looking at the source of the noise- it was coming from the window. He opened the windows and peeped outside when a soft pebble hit him directly on his forehead

Ouch he rubbed the area where the pebble hit him

Offo ab window kholke jhaakoge toh yahi hoga na she said climbing into his room in the middle of the night

Pratap's eyes widened in disbelief as he realised that the troublemaker was the she- devil itself Tum!!!! Aadhi raat ko mere room mein kya kar rahi ho? Aur yeh kya pehna hai tumne?

He made a face as Ajabde looked down at her night clothes - shorts with a simple tee that read Panga Na Lena. She looked at his red face and smiled

Itni jaldi guestroom ko apna room maan liya tumne mujhe toh laga ki mere saath fight karoge tum. Chalo accha hai

Pratap: I just decided ki tum guest ho yahan so Athiti devo bhava ko follow karoon main kaunsa poori life tum yahan rahogi

Ajabde: Aur agar main yeh kahoon ki main yahin rehne waali hoon hamesha toh

Pratap: Tum yahan kyun aayi ho?

Ajabde: Ab poocha tumne important sawaal- mujhe bhook lagi hai. Kuch khaane ko dona mereko

Pratap stared at the girl incredulously: Tum yahan aadhi raat ko mere se khaana maangne aayi ho? Main kya tumhara personal chef hoon jo tumhe khaana doon

Ajabde: Pehli baat it's not aadhi raat - time is 2:30AM, dusri baat main pehle Daadi ke paas jaa rahi thi phir yaad aaya ki woh dadaji medicine lekar sote hain toh unko disturb karna theek nahi hai and mereko sirf yeh pata tha ki tum iss room mein aur logon ka idea nahi hai. Aur tumne just abhi bola na ki tum Athithi devo bhava main believe karte ho - toh tumhaari athithi is hungry re- khaane ko kuch toh do

Pratap: Kaisi musibat hai...chalo tumko khaana dete hain

Ajabde: yipeee
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Garimaa...finally get a chance to read your updates... the story is too good!!
Tee with Panga na Lena written 🀣
Ajabde is amazing!!!!! I jut love this attitude waali Ajab!! Pratap ke liye perfect πŸ˜† I'm in love with her... 😎
I think this is gonna be one of my favorite stories of yours
Dekhte hai inki aadhi raat waali date agle update mein πŸ˜† Pratap's gonna be fun to watch..going crazy ❀️
Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
I'm your firstie after a long time Garima Di!!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Garima!!!
I am a big fan of this Ajab!!! Kitna hairaan pareshaan kar diya hai Pratap ko, who is a gangster... I love it!! I love her tee!! Aur itna bind a as hai, ki Pratap sharmaa gaya, instead!

Ab kya karein, Pratap ne bhi accept kar liya ki she's atithi devoted bhava

Waite I loved how you turned it around in the story - in the show Ajabde says this for Pratap and here Pratap is saying that for Ajab, which is sheer brilliance


Dekhte hain Pratap apne atithi ko khaana kya khilaata hai

Eagerly waiting for the next update!

And congratulations on becoming an IF-rocker!!!


Lots of love and hugs,
RuVa
Edited by RuVa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
oh God dats so cute I can imagine roshni and Faisal completely
well done Garima . waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

Garimaa...finally get a chance to read your updates... the story is too good!!
Tee with Panga na Lena written 🀣
Ajabde is amazing!!!!! I jut love this attitude waali Ajab!! Pratap ke liye perfect πŸ˜† I'm in love with her... 😎
I think this is gonna be one of my favorite stories of yours
Dekhte hai inki aadhi raat waali date agle update mein πŸ˜† Pratap's gonna be fun to watch..going crazy ❀️
Update soon!



Natasha
Yaar its so ggod to see you here

Ajabde loves you too

Thank you

Date will be posted pretty soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Natasha_1234

I'm your firstie after a long time Garima Di!!! 😳



Yes you are my firstie😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: enaluvfiction

oh God dats so cute I can imagine roshni and Faisal completely
well done Garima . waiting for more



Am so happy that you imagined Rosal here

Thank you


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RuVa

Garima!!!

I am a big fan of this Ajab!!! Kitna hairaan pareshaan kar diya hai Pratap ko, who is a gangster... I love it!! I love her tee!! Aur itna bind a as hai, ki Pratap sharmaa gaya, instead!

Ab kya karein, Pratap ne bhi accept kar liya ki she's atithi devoted bhava

Waite I loved how you turned it around in the story - in the show Ajabde says this for Pratap and here Pratap is saying that for Ajab, which is sheer brilliance


Dekhte hain Pratap apne atithi ko khaana kya khilaata hai

Eagerly waiting for the next update!

And congratulations on becoming an IF-rocker!!!


Lots of love and hugs,
RuVa



Ruva
hope you are doing well
Ajabde is pretty chilled out while Pratap is a bit uptight - he needs to loosen up a bit

Yeah teh athithi devo bhava was a last minute addition to the update and am glad that you liked it

Thank you

Update coming right up

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