Originally posted by: enaluvfiction
dusri karnavati lol... absolutely she is pratap ka to sandwich banane wala hai π²
kair is situation se ek thought dimag me aaya hai
I will share it soon
by the way I'm firstie I guess
good going Garima, update soon can't wait
Originally posted by: aditi_angel
sorry garima di ...
i was soo busy with my studies ki mae comment hi na kar paayi...ππi tell you ...dimag ghum jaata hai padhne ke baaad...ππwell , i read all parts in one go...i was laughing like dead with the tee panga na lena...i too have it...π€£same pinch ajabde...π³but i love the character sketch of karna dadi , ajabde , and dheer chachi...πi loved them...and the siblings have an amazing bond between them , loved it ...but seriouslly pratap your great dadisa to teasing him for his soo many run away brides ...π€ͺbut i have my doubts , is maan ka dulha a positive or negative banda..., whatever it is will love to see wedding functions with a crazy ajab , and a bechara pratap...π³πamazing update, give us the next one soon...
Originally posted by: pari0706
π€£ Garima janna you are too good...
Ajabde's entry was just OMG and Shakti was laughing at Pratap as he now has to take 3 ladies shopping - bechara he is toh gone π€£π€£and dusri karnawati π€£π€£π€£ so that's why Karnawati left oooh it was just too goodyesterday's Maha Episode made me feel that many things were left unsaid - like I would have loved DB to reveal some of the facts about how she tried killing pratap and how she separated Praja etc etcπbut this updated made me smile π so thank you so much for that
Chapter 11
Karnawati was smiling to herself as she walked through the jewellery store looking at the latest collection after all Maan's so called wedding was taking place and she had to keep up with all the drama. She already knew something was wrong when the rishta was brought up but as because of Girija Dai she had to stay mum and go with everything. Girija Dai was mad about getting her grandchildren settling down first with Pratap and now with Maan. Poor Pratap for a whole year that boy had to go through everything only to have the brides run on him. Her eyes fell on a beautiful anklet as she stared at it with longing before moving along
I thought you liked it a gruff voice said from besides her
Karnawati smiled as she turned to look at her husband: And I thought you had business to take care off
RS: Haan toh meeting ho gayi when I found out that you were here so I came
KW: Okay
RS: You won't ask me more questions
KW: No besides it's time to leave
RS: Going home already?
KW: Nope- movie time.
RS: Kiske saath? His eyes bore into hers like he was searching her soul for answers. Sanga was a possessive man who made sure everyone knew to stay away from the people and things he loved. He was a ruthless man when it came down to the protection of his loved ones and sometimes Karnawati liked to use it to her advantage just like she was doing at the moment
KW: Well I have two tickets for Akshay's latest release and was thinking of inviting my old friend
AS she waved the tickets in her hands RS took them out of hers while giving her his favourite smile
KW: What are you doing?
RS: Taking you to the movies my love
Both were unaware that all of their grandchildren were present in the same mall looking at different shops. Maan saw a pretty dress so she took Shakti while Chand wanted to get herself candies so did Vikram so both of them went prancing together to the candy shop while Pratap got stuck with Ajabde who was making him walk all over the mall looking at things from the outside and not even entering any of the shops
Pratap: I thought you wanted to shop
Ajabde: hmmm
Pratap: then what are we doing?
Ajabde: Window shopping. I like to check out stores that interest me and then I'll go and buy stuff.
They entered Shopper's Stop and then Pratap Singh Sisodia was introduced to a whole new persona of Ajabde Punwar. The girl ran wild inside the store taking things off the racks into her hands like a kid was set-loose in a candy cum toy store. After what felt like ages they came out of the store with Ajabde walking happily in front of the poor guy who was weighed down by the numerous shopping bags. Everyone met at a coffee shop and as soon as Pratap entered all his siblings tried very hard to hide their giggles but failed when Ajabde decided to have some fun
Ajabde: Offo Pratap keep the bags down and mere liye na get a hot mocha
Pratap: Main tumhaara waite nahi hoon- jaake khud le lo
Ajabde: But am so tired after shopping baba
Pratap: You are tired - poore time I was the one waiting upar se I had to carry all these bags and not to forget usse pehle I was dragged all over the malls because you like to window shop
Ajabde: Accha theek hai I'll get the order and I'll get you something too
She goes to give her order when a group of boys enter the shop making a beeline for two girls that sat outside enjoying their coffee and then the guys started to trouble them. The girls looked all around but no one came to help them when one of the guys stretched his hand to get hold of the girl's hand but never could reach it as his hand got stopped mid -way
Inside coffee shop Pratap looks everywhere thinking where did this girl go off to now? When a guy comes crashing through the window and lands right near his chair
Chand: Dada bhai!!! She points her finger outside where Ajabde was standing up against the group of boys with a smile adoring her face
Ajabde: Arey yaar mazaa nahi aa raha- to the coffee guy play some music na
And then Salman's hit songs came on
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Re ai ai...
Barah mahine me barah tareeke se
Tujh ko pyar jataaunga
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Re ai ai...
Barah minute bhi lagta ab naa
Tere bin reh reh paaunga re
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Dhinka Chika Dhinka Chika
Re ai ai...
As the song played all the guys attacked her and Ajabde in one go rained punches and kicks on all of them. Pratap and the others stared at her wide-eyed while the two girls looked at her with sparkles in their eyes. Finally she picked up their leader by the collar making him stand in front of the girl
Ajabde: Aapka name kya hai?
Girl: Durga
Ajabde: Naam Durga aur itni darri hui? Apne safety apne haathon mein hoti hai. Maaro
Durga: Ji?
Ajabde gestured for her to hit the leader and then she slapped the heck out of him making Ajabde smile while she threw the guy on the floor
Ajabde: Yeh address hai jahan self defence seekhaate hain girls ko free of cost. Aap aur aapki friend jaake join kar le kyunki main baar baar nahi milne waali bacchaane ke liye
Durga: Thank you
And then Ajabde came inside the broken shop picked up her drink in a take away cup and proceeded to leave when she saw a guy looking at the mess
Ajabde: Don't worry jo kuch bhi damage hua hai na uska bill aap isko bhej dena (points at Pratap who stares at her incredulously as she begins to walk towards the door)
Ajabde: Pratap bill tumko bhej denge ab chalo ghar nahi jaana kya and please mere saare bags laana mat bhoolna
Vikram and Chand together: Bandi yeh bindaas hai
Shakti and Maa together: Haan
Pratap stood silent taking in another aspect of Ajabde's personality - just who are you Ajabde Punwar?
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