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1. Yellow is Life - Page 1
2. Side effects of Baarish - Page 2
3. 'Tell Me' Coupon - Page 3
Aditi 🤗
See i am the first one to read your drabble
I must say its very sweet and beautiful ❤️
love PriRa sweet conversation 😳
And yes how i can forget to mention last line😆 Meera maa only could save him from khadoos wife 🤣
Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03
Aditi 🤗
See i am the first one to read your drabble
I must say its very sweet and beautiful ❤️
love PriRa sweet conversation 😳
And yes how i can forget to mention last line😆 Meera maa only could save him from khadoos wife 🤣
Hahaha bhavi thank you so much dear ❤️❤️
Thanks for reading it yaar 🤗
Originally posted by: beingaditij
Hahaha bhavi thank you so much dear ❤️❤️
Thanks for reading it yaar 🤗
Really very sweet one
Keep writing🤗
2. Side effects of Baarish
Priya sulked when the first drop of rain fell down on the soil, from the clouds and suddenly it started raining heavily.
"Ye Mumbai ne to theka leke rakha hai baarish ka," she irritated in the kitchen when she was preparing a cup of coffee for herself.
She held her coffee mug when she smelled the fragrance of pakode, but the same time the cook murmured, "oh, I forgot aloo ke pakode, Ram sir's favourite"
"Aloo ke pakode, they are too heavy!," she made faces.
Tarun came in between, "Yes ma'am but sir being sir"
"Hmmm!," She thought for a while and smirked.
Ram was enjoying Gobhi ki ke pakode and 9th cup of tea with munching gobhi ke pakode on the window sill when Priya took the food trolley filled with umpteenth number of pakodas.
"Arey Priya, why did you took it Tarun hai na," Ram formalised.
She looked at the cups of tea, "Tarun ko maine kuch kaam diya hai"
"Oh! Tumhe bhi pakode khane hain," he excited.
She rolled her eyeballs, "No No No, actually mujhe meri hi recipe try karni hai"
He smelled the pakodas and munch one by one when she extended his anti-acid tablets bottle, "Have all, nahi to pakka BP se cholesterol bhi bad jayega"
"Tum taane maare bina nahi reh sakti na," he asked like a child when Tarun came with a bowl of ghee upma and small bowl filled with yoghurt.
He asked immediately, "Why do you have such tasteless food?"
"Because health is wealth, upma se cholesterol nahi badhega aur dahi se acidity," she controlled her laughter whereas he coughed, "Haan haan ab pakode bhi khane do, dant bahut khali"
She shrugged her head and continue having her food with a mug of light coffee.
I am loving all the stories you are writing on Ram & Priya... reading so many back to back 🙈
Yeh dono chapters kitne simple thhe & funn too.....loved how you have caught up on their characters & write scenes with no cliffhangers yet😳
Originally posted by: SONIA441
I am loving all the stories you are writing on Ram & Priya... reading so many back to back 🙈
Yeh dono chapters kitne simple thhe & funn too.....loved how you have caught up on their characters & write scenes with no cliffhangers yet😳
Thank you so much ❤️❤️
3. 'Tell me' Coupon
Priya was folding her clothes when Ram came out from the washroom, brushing her hair off with the help of the towel.
There was an awkward silence around and Ram being Ram wasn't with it.
He tried to trace out something to talk but he was scared about Priya's world famous 'fatkaar', with which he was the one who was not unfamiliar.
He coughed to start the conversation, "How was your college?"
She frowned, "It was a Sunday Mr. Kapoor"
He bit his tongue to be formal, "Tujhse na ho payega Ram, kuch aur soch"
Suddenly, his gaze fell on the painting which he read 'trust', gifted by Priya to him on the very first day of the wedding.
He searched for something in his suit's pocket from she was arranging her almirah, but brushed with Ram.
She felt as she has never wanted this touch but wanted too.
Brushing of this awkward thought she started preparing for next morning when he said a little louder, "Tell me' Coupon", which somehow forced her to turn back and look at him with scrunch.
He again said, "tell me coupon, you only gave me that night. Aur main tumse kuch bhi pooch sakta hoon. Right!"
Priya breathed deeply, "Not today Mr. Kapoor."
"It is never a tomorrow, kisi ne kaha tha," he indicated at her only when once she was trying to explain him about how irresponsible Shubham is.
She rolled her eyes, "What do you wanna ask Mr. Kapoor?", At which he thought deeply and smiled, "Bacche!"
"What do you mean?," She asked.
He again said, "Bacche kese lagte hain tumhe? Mujhe to wadde saune lagde hain"
She widened her eyes, "What do you Mr. Kapoor?"
"Are oh madam! Don't scold me now. Mera wo matlab nahi tha," he tried to clarify his intentions.
"Acche Lagte hain," she replied.
"And if they belong to you?," He again asked.
She immediately snatched the coupon from his hand and torn it, "Aapke intentions pe ab mujhe thoda doubt ho raha hai"
"This coupon was only about questions not aham...," He hesitant and stopped.
"Bacche acche hote hain Mr. Kapoor bas bade galat hote hain" she replied.
Ram frowned, "Matlab?"
"I don't want to leave my child just because I didn't want him just like Mr. Sood, my so called father," she had tears in her eyes which she brushed and gulping the cough Ram realised how wrong his question was.
He looked down, "I am so--", but before he could appologize Priya covered the duvet and slept to fake him.
Ram bit his lower lip, "Kya Ram tu bhi na, kuch aur nahi mila poochne ko"
"It's okay Mr. Kapoor galati ho jati hai," she pressed her lips and continue her thoughts, "I will never leave my child, but I wouldn't be able to digest, you would be leaving us"
"Mana ye shaadi samjhauta hai, magar ye samjhauta bhi mujhe bada accha lagta hai," Ram thought and covered the duvet while continuing.
That was some strong stuff😳
But why the kids conversation now? I thought if Ram was afraid of Priya not talking...it would be cos he wants to have an important conversation not an impromptu one.
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