Originally posted by: NityaAhuja15
Let's be honest...and I'm crying here right now, whilst writing this! Seriously
Okay, I'm back!
So although mujhe kuch kehne ki jaroorat nahi ki how this is, because I don't want to scale the intensity in words, but I'll try!
Three things I liked the most ( i guess everyone liked )
Priya standing up for herself and not being a doormat
Ram realizing his mistake and not being self obsessed or egoistic
Shalini wanting to go with priya and priya agreeing to it
So firstly I love how you made the use of the fact that we don't write it in the contract that we need basic respect and decency from people, because that's understood, but a businessman like ram for whom ig business ahd contracts are everything, probably we need to mention such things in contract only.
Next, I felt so bad at the way shalini said that priya, can I come with you...mujhe nahi rehna akele iss ghar me. The fact that she used the word AKELE even when she has her relatives, other people, shardul, and most importantly her own don, Ram, says so much, that what her life was before Priya and how much she depends on her. Poor lady, I felt so so bad for her.
Next, I was really sad that Priya got hurt when she had started liking Ram, but a reality check was so necessary for this otherwise selfless girl. And I loved that she agreed to take shalini with her. She is just so good yaar! Khud bhi poori raat so nahi payi.
Coming on to Ram, we all know how he is, but the sudden depth you added to him with his limited but necessary monologues and dialogues was brilliant. For me, Ram was redeemed when he shed that tear and said that I'm sorry Dr.Priya. Because Realization is always the first and the most difficult step for redemption to occur. That last line teared me also along with Ram, and this just shows your brilliance at making us feel so much Mrina Di. I don't wanna say more because main bhaavnao me beh jaungi otherwise. But I hope my words did atleast 10 percent the justice if not more, to the emotions I felt when I first read this.
You're too good, and this work was too brilliant to say the least. Period ❤
You my talented sister, are tooo sweet. Thank you.🤗
Yes, I just feel that Shalini is so alone and lonely in that house. She needs someone... anyone just to be with and relax. I feel Priya is the daughter she never had and always wanted just like how she says in the show too.
@bold: I'm overwhelmed by that one statement and so happy that I was able to make you feel what I was feeling while writing that line.🥺
I am half way down the next chapter. You should hopefully get an update tonight.😳 Ram's side of story coming up.
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