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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: shamavi
veena what to say... u have sooo good sense of writing..

it was cute.. sooo beautiful when raya do romance in ur ff..uff kya kahooon ram babu ki romance wowww bahut tand lag rahi hain😳 ram haina😉 to keep u warm.. mr kapoor give me sari he says give me kiss😳 omg that was sooo 😳 u were making me blush through out the update... pihu was soo cute and raya convo with pihu tooo

itna achha kaise liksakthi hoo muje bhi bataooo ..

baarish ka mausam with raya and pihu... want to see them dance together in the rain..

the last words of ur words were really touching 😳 😊

u write sooo nice...👏 aur liko waiting for next update

so sweet ..hahaha mne to barish me itna bhi kra diya ekta se milo wo to bas turn twist lana janti h😆

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Veena Love U yaar...🤗 kitna achha likheti hai aap oh my god

Ram..can i start my task...

Priya...hhaaww..about what???

Ram..about love u yar..

Priya...oh to pyar bhi puchh k karenge...

Abhi bhi aap ke RamBabu question/answer mein hi atke hue hai.. business deal confirm hone tak aage nahi badhenge 😆

.priya ansr nhi krti h kewal rambharose khud ko chhod deti h...lol..

rambharose haan Loved it...👏

Priya...uff..khane wali cheez h kya???..pet hi nhi bharta h??

Natkhat Priya koi mauka nahi chodti Rambabu ko romantic banane ka

Ufff..ye bachhe bhi na hr cheez ka hisab chahiye hota h inhe...
😳

"koi bat nhi rambabu jindgi h..pehle cheezo se bhari thi to sath k liye adhuri thi..ab sath mil gya h to cheeze to jarurato k hisab se aati hi jayengi..agar insan k pas sabkuchh rhega to life me needs nhi rhengi aur agr needs nhi hongi to insan to jeena hi chhod dega boss..to lage raho...
koi kam nhi h to chalo time pas k liye pyar kr lete hain...aah i nvr undrstand..pyar pe time barbad karte kaise hain log.."

Iske liye to main aapko bata nahi sakti aap kitni suljhi hui writer bilkul hamari suljhi hui priya ..
Zindagi ki sachaayi darshati ho aap...
Its take the privilege to honour you as the 'Charlie Chaplin' of IF (BALH) - logoan ko kitna hasaati ho saath mein jeevan ke satya ko bhi dikha dete ho...
aap such mein grt ho yaar kabhi bhi track nahi chodti ho ..Love u yaar
Hats offf

o my god...charlie chaplin...this is somthing like unbelievable for me...such me honour ho gya...but really i am vry glad when people like my khurafat ...

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
I always loved ur punch lines, lekin what I like most us that ur view point, aap jo sochte ho woh aap bejhijak kehre ho aur itni khoobsurati ke saath pesh karte ho ke padne ke baad sirf WAH hi nikalta hain, sach bolu, hum toh aapke updates ke liye intezaar me rehte hain, I really really appreciate, chaliye choddiye zyada emotional hi gaya, but seriously I mean it, continue plz

awww thats really vry appriciable for me...thank u sooo much...😊

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

part 31

"bin mausm barish achhi hoti h"

Oh what a destiny...mai soch hi rhi thi kahani ko yha se kis track pe le jau..qki hamesha matchup krne k liye mujhe hi track k hisab se kahani bnani padhti h but is bar ekta ne kamal kr diya wo khud le aayi kahani ko mere track pe...lol..ab barish thodi aur barsani hogi...woow..ok so main aage badhti hu with this barish...actully m barish k sath khel rhi thi to ekta ne usme turn twist ka tadka laga diya...but i will take it as gud way..qki abhi mera mood barish pe pani ferne ka nhi h...to aage badhte hain...

Sabhi barish ka maza le rhe the tabhi ram ko yad ata h ki factory me saman unpack pada hua h..wo priya se bolta hua nikal jata h factory..puri tension me rhta h..priya use rokne ki koshis krti h pr wo sunta nhi h...priya bhi pareshan ho jati h..priya sochti h...

Priya..mr.kapoor itni hadbadi me chale gye...itni tez barish ho rhi h ..bhagwan ..car achhe se drive kare...

Udhar ram factory pahonchta h...uske to hosh hi ud jate hain wha ka nazara dekh k...use kuchh samajh hi nhi aa rha hota h..bs wo idhr udhr dekh rha hota h...idhr priya bhi pareshan rhti h ram ko phone karti h pr ram phone ghar pe hi chhod k chala jata hai...priya ko gussa bhi aa rha tha aur tension bhi ho rhi thi...

Thodi der baad ram wapas aata h priya uske pas aati h...ram aake priya k gale lag jata h

priya...its ok mr.kapoor

ram...its not ok priya...ye sab kaise ho gya...??

Priya ram ko kas k pakad leti h...sab aapki hi glti h

ram...meri glti h???

Priya...hmmm apne mujhe bhigaya tha na to isiliye bhagwanji ne aapko bhi bhiga diya...

Ram...priyaaa

priya...hahaha...its ok ab thank u wank u mt boliyega qki sirf thank u se kam nhi chalega...

Ram...achhaaa

priya...hmmm thank u k sath sorry bhi bolna padega..

Ram...pehli bat to m thank u bolunga hi nhi aur dusri bat sorry kyun bolu???

Priya...pehli bat sorry isliye bolna padega qki apne meri bat nhi suni..aur mujhe phir se bhinga diya..gile hoke aaye aur chipak gye..aur dusri bat thank u kyun nhi bolenge???

Ram...qki agr thank u bol dunga to bhul jaunga ki tumne ek bar phir se meri jindgi bacha li...

Priya...cmon mr.kapoor mne apke k liye kuchh nhi kiya apne liye kiya..agr aapka nuksan ho jata to aap phir busy ho jate..lekin apko pta kaise chala ..??

Ram...wo chhodo tum ye btao tumne ye sab kiya kaise???

Priya...kuchh nhi kiya mne..bas aap rat ko sabkuchh handl krte krte so gye to mujhe laga ki jra progress puchh lu apke wrkr se to unhone btaya ki sab ho gya h bs packing k liye sir ne kuchh btaya to humlog chhod de ya pack kr de...to mne keh diya ki pack kar de...bs aur kya...

Ram...priya tum nhi hoti to mera kya hota...

Priya...kuchh nhi hota..qki m to hoti hi...qki m janti hu na ki waise to mere pati bht smart h sabkuchh apne balbute kar sakte hain par kya h na ki unki dadi hamesha kehti hain ki thode se golu hain...to khyal rakhna padhta h boss...

Ram...priyaaa

priya...hahaha...achha ab jaiye aur kapde change kar lijiye wrna thand lag jayegi...

Ram...wooow thand

priya...shutup mr.kapoor...jaiye wrna pihu ko bula dungi...

Ram...ja rha hu yar

bechare rambabu ajkl biwi k pyar me pad gaye hain na to..bade hi achhe lagte hain...khair ab sabkuchh set h ek aur naye badlaw k liye...m janti hu ki meri imagination thodi ovr h...hum itne achhe ki ummeed nhi kar sakte h...lol..khair mne aisa isliye kiya qki yar ab ek serial me struggle karne k liye 6 mahine kafi hote hain yar...ab thoda behtar dekhna to bnta h...rambabu ko itna bechara bechara i cnt tolrate...

agli subah ram ka maal dispatchj ho jata h ab sabhi hairan pareshan hoke idhr udhr tehl rhe hain ki saman pahonchne k bad result kya hoga...pta nhi tension me intezar aur lamba kyun ho jata h...

to b continue

Edited by veena23 - 12 years ago

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shavii

@shavii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#525

omg .. golu ki biwi smart hain😆
achha hua yaar.. but veena u shd have had an c night serial mein to nahi horaha hain yahi to kardoo😆 kash cv teri taraf dimaag paate😆 ek pregnancy track hojay..result will be fine dont worry varna hum comment todi na karenge 😆

Edited by shamavi - 12 years ago

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.sangs123.

@.sangs123.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#526

awesome update plz cont soon waiting

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#527

😛

Originally posted by: shamavi
omg .. golu ki biwi smart hain😆
achha hua yaar.. but veena u shd have had an c night serial mein to nahi horaha hain yahi to kardoo😆 kash cv teri taraf dimaag paate😆 ek pregnancy track hojay..result will be fine dont worry varna hum comment todi na karenge 😆

hattt...mne c-night karane ka theka le rakha h kya...in kamine cvs se to kuchh hota nhi sab humi log karenge kya..😆😛

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shavii

@shavii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: veena23
😛

hattt...mne c-night karane ka theka le rakha h kya...in kamine cvs se to kuchh hota nhi sab humi log karenge kya..😆😛

ya u know cv cant give what we want.. after all they have brain but use it very less😆 unlike us who have to use for 24 7 non stop😆

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sss283

@sss283

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Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: shamavi
omg .. golu ki biwi smart hain😆
achha hua yaar.. but veena u shd have had an c night serial mein to nahi horaha hain yahi to kardoo😆 kash cv teri taraf dimaag paate😆 ek pregnancy track hojay..result will be fine dont worry varna hum comment todi na karenge 😆

haan di c-nite bhi de do na

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