an Angel in disguise thrd 4, Ariya ff (NEW ACCOUNT) ch 64 on page 4 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 months ago
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will be updating next month

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hey when will you update the next part

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just got better

will try to update in april

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Thank god you are back...hope you are doing good...take care of your self. We can wait till eternity for the update

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hey guys i am really sorry for the delay my house was getting renovated and the place me and my family were staying had no internet connection i promise to update this week
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CHAPTER 64

Riya realized that she was hugging Arjun infront of everyone, she quickly let go of him

R: sorry, sir

A: it`s okay, in big countries such small things happen

The other ETF members minus the guests were shocked to see Ariya hug and Arjun wasn’t angry at Riya, Riya almost glared at him but remembered they were in a party

Riya went to stand with the other ETF members while Arjun went to talk to Maan and Arnav

Sh: Ri, you hugged Arjun sir infront of everyone? Are you crazy? The khadoos boss

R: in excitement I forgot who I was hugging

Ch: but Arjun sir was not angry

L: and he didn’t yell

Ay: well, in case you haven’t noticed he is like that for a while now

S: something is going on

Sid: is he secretly taking anger management class?

Virat in very quiet voice: Pyaar ka jadu hai bhai (it is magic of love)

Sakshi laughed at Virat`s talk

Scene shifts to Arnav and Maan

The commissioner of Benares had arrived so Maan and Arnav were talking to him

Ar: nice to meet you, commissioner sir

Com Khan: same here, mr Raizada. I just congratulated the couple

Ar: thanks. The Maan: over there, sir

Maan introduced the commissioner to Arjun, Sameer and Siddarth

Com Khan: I heard a lot of good things from commissioner Coelho, and I am quite impressed how you guys managed to solve 2 cases in less then a month

S: its our duty, sir

A: and our team`s dedication

Com Khan: very impressed

The commissioner was going to say something when Gunjan and Samrat announced that the second game was starting and they called everyone where lots of chairs were placed

Maan: sir, we still haven’t still told the other ETF members about their mission

Com sir Khan: you do know that now that they are investigating the cases, they might find the truth someday

Sid: we know, sir but now it is not the right time

Com sir: hope the right timing comes soon. I have read their case files; will they be able to handle it?

Sid: I promise, sir. It will be soon

Scene shifts to Gunjan

Gun: it`s time for musical chairs

Sam: we will choose 12 people from this chit box to participate and the rules are simple, song will be played by the DJ and at any moment he will stop it and you guys must hurry and sit on the chair and the person standing will be out

Gunj: so, let`s start calling the names

Sam: Geet, Sameer (he made a face but still went to stand next to the chairs), Ayesha, Arjun, Sakshi, Virat, Manvi, Chotu, Tasha (Khushi`s assistant), Arnav, Liza and Aditya (a guest)

Gunj: music start

The song started

(it`s rocking from the movie Kya lovestory hai), the participants started walking around the chair, the music stopped and everyone sat down except for Tasha; she was out of the game. As the game progressed, Geet, Liza, Aditya, Arnav were out of the game

Sam: sorry, bro. tough luck (To Arnav)

Ar: it`s good that I lost

Sam: why? Ar: well, my wife wouldn’t let me live after this, I will tell you later

The game continued; the song stopped, everyone sat down but Virman sat down together were arguing about who sat first

V: I was first

Man: no, I was first

Sam: guys, calm down. It`s just a game

Man: but…

Sh: choti, come here. Virat sat first, okay

Man: but Shreesu…

R: choti, come on. You two fighting infront of everyone, it`s not good

Manv: fine (She huffed and went to stand next to Shriza)

Sam: now, let`s continue

The game continued; the song stopped and they hurriedly sat down.Sameer accidently sat on Ayesha leaving the guests laughing because Sameer ran after apologizing to Ayesha who just nodded her head

Ar: now that was funny

Kh: let`s continue After a while Virat and Ayesha were out of the game

Sam: now, the only particpants who are left is Sakshi and Arjun

Gun: let`s announce the gift for the winner

Sam: it`s all you can eat for one day for two people at the biggest restaurant in our town

Sa: I have to win this. Food, here I come (Everyone laughed at Sakshi`s words)

Arjun in his mind: great, I can bring Riya there for our date. Let`s win this

Kh: ready? May the best one win. Play music

The song started playing, Arjun and Sakshi kept on going round and round. At first, Riya wanted Arjun to win but she saw how Sakshi`s face lit up on the mention of food, she wanted Sakshi to win .The music stopped, Arjun almost sat down but he lost because before sitting down, he looked at Riya and Riya winked at him making him shocked and Sakshi won

Sa: yeah, I won

All guests and Arshi and Sajan were happy for Sakshi and the ETF members minus Arjun were cheering for Sakshi

Gunj: ok, guys, the last highlight of the evening is fireworks. We have to go outside in the garden by the pool for this

Everyone was leaving when suddenly Riya dragged Arjun to the terrace

A: Riya, what are you doing? Riya said nothing

Scene shifts to the poolside

Everyone was waiting for the fireworks

Sid: Sakshi

Sa: haan?

Sid: I have something for you

He took out a gift box, he gave it to Sakshi, she opened it and it was golden hairclip with stars

Sa: wow, so pretty. Is it for me?

Sid: yes, I saw it and thought it would suit you

Sa: thank you (She kissed his cheek)

Sid held his cheek, he was shocked

Sa: I am so happy. Can you put it on me?

Sid: huh? Oh, sure

He put it on her hair

Sa: how do I look?

Sid: pretty

Sa: thanks

Scene shifts to Ariya

Ariya arrived at the balcony; Riya closed the balcon doors incase people came looking for her

R: sorry, Arjun. Because of me you lost. I didn’t want Sakshi to lose, she had already lost the first game. I will make up for this (A little hyper)

A: how? (Amused)

R: hmm(thinking), I will make aloo puri and biryani for you

A: for me?

R: yes. Chotu and Shree always say I make the best food

A: okay

R: great. Let`s go down now. The fireworks will start soon

A: Riya, wait

R: yes?

A: I have something for you


He took out a box and opened it. It was a gold hairclip with moon on it, Riya was surprised

A: I overheard you talking with Sakshi about your hairclip. I wasn’t with you at your struggling times but I am here now for present and future and will never let you be sad

R: it`s really beautiful

A: the first time I knew that I liked you was because of your hairclip, so this is my first gift to you as a boyfriend

Riya got tears in her eyes

A: if you don’t like it, I can go and exchange it for a better one

R: no, I really love it, can you put it on me?

Arjun put it on her

R: how does it look?

A: perfect

Ariya hugged; Riya overcome with emotions suddenly kissed Arjun on his lips. Arjun was first shocked at this but responded to her quickly. After their kiss, they put their foreheads together

A: I love you, Riya

R: I love you too, Arjun

At that moment the fireworks started, Ariya looked from the terrace

Scene shifts to downstairs

Sameer had called Ayesha to talk with him

S: Ayesha, i am really sorry for the mishap

Ay: no worries, sir. It was just a mistake

S: thanks for understanding

Samesha stood together while watching the fireworks

A few moments before the fireworks

Virat was drinking when Manvi accidently bumped into him spilling the drink on him

Man: I am so sorry. Oh, it`s you

V: yeah, It`s me

Man: whatever

She turned around but at the same time the fireworks suddenly started, she got scared and held Virat`s arm

V: manvi, it`s just fireworks (Calmingly)

Manv: oh (She let`s go of his arm and just left from there) Virat just kept looking at her going away All the couples were enjoying their together, the singles were just enjoying their alone moment


precap: date(s) and case but who is the suspect

really sorry for the delay

first got sick and after that house renovations and then cleaning the house. it was a rollercoaster ride this year.

i hope you like this chapter as well as the prev ones


Edited by VirMan506 - 1 months ago
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Posted: 1 months ago
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Etifians shocked jab arjun gussa nahi hua riya ke hug karne se abhi sab ko kaha pata arjun riya se pyar karta hai commissioner ne sahi kaha sabko bata dene game start sakshi jeet gai riya ne sakshi ko jitane ke liye Arjun ko distract kiya Sid aur Arjun ne same tarah ki hi clip riya aur sakshi ko di Ariya moment beautiful fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm

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