FF: ASTITVA - STRUGGLE FOR EXISTENCE PT. 9 PG. 101

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: tani.m
Awesome update👏

ariya moments was amazing...arjun -''aacha to tum mujhe khadoos samajhti ho ''

ab acp saab aap khadoos ho... to riya yahi samjhe gi na apko

aur aisha ka ek beta oh bhi 6 saal ka

This was just superb update and well written

update soon

thanks for the pm ...

Love u tani

Ur smiles are really cute 😊

Glad u are liking it

stay tuned n keep commenting 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015
res
unres...
well very interesting...
suspicious v...
aisha aise kaha chali gyi..
n why is she not telling anyone anything...
arjun is ryt...
she must not take this lightly...
the team is also so much concerned about her...

aree..isko goli v lag gyi...
but wo last part was...

mummy..aisha?? yaha bhi??
omg
update soon!!!

arey bolna bhul gyi...

Arjun's mai khadoos hu...n Ria's arjun sir ne mere sath mazak kia was...

Thanks Dear Ishi

Gad u liked it

Aisha mummy iska raaz baad main kholungi 😆

Stay tuned n keep commenting

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

sorry dear iss story ko abhi read kar rahi hu..

characterization n concept is just amazing..

thanks 4 pm

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Unresd my comment on pg19...

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

comment for part1:-

wow just love it...

don't worry shree sam ko handle karne ke liye aayesha he na..?

ye kya..?aayesha have a past...

koi usako dhamki de raha he..

aayesha n her mother leave the place..

plz continue soon

thanks 4 pm..

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

omg aayesha get hurt..

aayesha have kid...

plz continue soon

thanks 4 pm

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deffa

@deffa

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Interesting update 👏
Everyone worried for Aisha 😒 Sam arranged security for her 😃
Loved Sam's concern for Aisha 😉
Aisha kahan chali gayi thi???? ❓
Ariya part 😆 😆 Arjun khadus...n Riya agreeing with him 🤣 🤣 🤣
I think Aisha is lying to Sam She is hiding something 😔
Aisha saved Sameer 😳 bt got hurt herself 😔
N the last part 😲 you too made Aisha mummy, like rimi 😭
Bt I like it 😊 Bt reveal the past soon
Kabir is cute😊
Precap is a bit scary
Cont soon

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ashmi

@ashmifebaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

awesome story dear...

and sorry for late commenting...

its really good one

and continue soon dear...

wait for next update...

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

awesome update
all r worried for aisha
samjun thinking abt Aisha's security 👏
but sam already arrange her security 👍🏼
thank god that Aisha is saved & she came back to etf
love Sameer concerned abt her even all team 👏
but Aisha still didn't tell them 😒
oh arjun called riya to tell her to talk to Aisha abt her problem
but riya got shocked to see arjun's soft side
love ariya convo 👍🏼
riya said to shree that arjun joke with her 🤣
omg Aisha is mom of six years old boy 😲
precape look scary
plz update soon

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APRIL14

@APRIL14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Late as usual ,and i am not sorry 😃

comment 4 chapter 1😳

Love ETF masti 😆

so sweet of u aisha ,first u defend your BOSSES ,and declared that SAM has two girlfriends 😳 ouch mere dil tutne ki awaz suni maine 😭 ohh ,u talking about his work and what 😲?,his muche 😲🤣

now i fell ok😳🤣 Chotu also join her,dare them not to under estimate their BOSSES 😃

Akela koi kushi se nahin rehta ,I AM TOUCHED 😳

AISHA and RIYA taking care of SAMJUN 😳😳

Karanbeer SING 😡 sound interesting and evil 😡 worry 4 her😭