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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 6
One SUV enter into famrhouse parking. Arjun cliimbed down from parking , and look around nervously. "Shit man you can do it , just say her i want to marry you nothing else yaar " Arjun himself try to boost his courage. He come front and heard lot of noises there. Ppl yelled loudly , someone laugh loudly somone sing a song , somone crying. Arjun goes back to frontdoor 7 check namplate again. "Ys , iam at right place." he murmued to himself.
Here in party Aruvand hold Shree's collar "Ye sab tere karan hua hai , vo mujhe cake de hi deti par tune aine time pe aake... " he try to complete his sentences when somonestuff cake in his mouth. Arivand leave Shree & turn around to found Chotu standing there. Meanwhile Rathod goes to near Ayesha & console her while controlling his laugh . Ayesha is too smart , she knows Rathod come here to make fun of her , she calls Rathod lovelingly , "Sam , my darling.' Rathod look at her lovelingly & goes very near to her. Ayesha rub her cheecks to Rathod's cheecks & says him "Ab mujh per has rahe the na , ab haso... " 😆😆😉
Riya begins to cry , her so called party turned into mess , her frnds , her brother , guest busy in throwing a things on each other. And her love Arjun not yet turned in for a party. Riya goes to table where whole cake put & sees only last piece is there , She take that piece in her hand & thinks "Maine cake taste bhi nahi kiya , to mai hi khaa leti hue. " but somone thorws cold-drink on her. Riya runngily goes towards one table , but someone hit her from back & push very hardly her forward , so she about to fall but someone hold her . Riya closes her eyes tight in fear ,but she realises that someone hold her , she open her eyes & lift her head to see her love of life Arjun hold her in mid-way. When she fall down , Riya's hand automatically goes towards Arjun's mouth & cake ' cream touches Arjun's mouth . Arjun staedies himself & suddenely soomone yells from behind " Yupiie Arjun Sir jeet gaye" 😆😃👏it Shree who yell when he sees cream on Arjun 's lips. Arjun happily taste cream through his toungue. Riya confusedly look at Shree , who madly jumping in happness. Arjun hold Riya's hand & eat cake. Riya feels so happy. Arjun also feeds her .
Chotu hold him. Arivand sees Arjun and look at him. "OMG he is Arjun , he is very smart & handsome. hmmm i seen him somwhere Arivand think & suddenely he remebers ys i seen his snap in nwespaper. Oh So he is ACP Arjun Rawte. Oh man matlab maine Acp Rawte se panga liya." He murmued to himself. and slowly free himself from Chotu's grip.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Guys sorry yaar , but baki ke part kal update kar dungi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Yipee!!!!!! Arjun won.🥳...
Ayesha nd Rathore was funny...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

dont worry poonam...


aaj puri raat acche se has has ke bitegi...

chal next update mein khud tujhe pm karungi

khush

thank u so much kavvv ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
yayyy Arjun won the bet 🥳
rathore and aisha part was really funny
loved arvind's reaction when he came to know that the guy is ACP Arjun
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007


Guys sorry yaar , but baki ke part kal update kar dungi..

I kno tum thak gaye hogi or need bhi Aa rahi hogi ...just take a rest nenjoys ur on sss nthankkk so much for this ss
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
hehhheee o m ggg arjun. ka fb account...mujhe bhi apna new fb account banana hoga bez i forget my old...
so arjun also lv her...grate...wao arjun looks so hansome...
ohhh hejhhheee o mg ye ashiya bhi na ...kya halat ker rakhi the poor sam ke...shopping bag..outside parlor...ohhh ...my poor sam...achha badala liya...
n my poor birthday girl...puri parti ka nash ker diya...woppy finaly arjun won...
maja aa gaya...
poor arvind ka face dekhane layak tha...when he saw arjun..omg ye wahi arjun hai...cant controled my laugh...plz manu conti soon...
or etana achha ss pad ker to gussa..kab. ka bhag gaya..!!!!!
lv u manuuu thank u so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Wow! Di! Sach mein yeh sweet badla hai! Please update soon aur please pm meee :-) thank you xxx
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
The first part is amazingly well written. 😊

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Guys , after yes epi we all Ariya lovers / Riya lovers feel bad. some persons are crying i also feel bad. So , guys for all of you i m gng to write one sweet & funny SS for Ariya & ETF. This SS filled with lost of masti , fun , sweet twists. and everything. 😊

Hpe u like it. This SS for Ariya lovers. And my sweet Sauten Kaveri.
Ye Kaveri ki farmish thi & mai vo pura kar rahi hue.
Raat bhar maine sirf drem mai Kavs ko dekha.😆😆
Concept -Kaveri & Me( raat bhar soch soch ke concept ready kiya)
pehele socha tha ki OS karnge , par baad SS kab ban gaya pata hi nhi chala. 😉😆
So , guys ready to laugh & hpe u all like it our little SS and sweet plan , jiske baad sab log khush ho😊( i hpe)
bahut bol diya , ab SS pado.
Part 1
All silently seat in Conferance room. Suddenely Rathod phone buzzes. He look at caller id & excuses all. Shree nudges Chotu.
Chotu who already bore from file work angrily yell on Shree , "Kya hai , kyu parshan kar raha hai?" Arjun & Riya look at them. "Shree , agar kaam ho gya ho to ghar jaao , yaha baith kar parshan mat karo. " Arjun says.
"Ammm , nahi Sir mai , mai vo . vo mai ... softwares update karta hue." saying this he vanishes from Arjun sight. Arjun look at at Riya & Chotu who constatly look at each other. "Ab tum dono ko alag se bolna padega kya? ya phir Rathod ko bula du?" Chotu hide his head in file. while Riya hold one file in hand and pertend to reading it. Arjun look at that file & concentrate on that file. He called Riya. "Sir , im busy . w can talk later." Riya ans him without lift her gaze from file. "Vo to thik hai , par ye naya tarika hai file padne ka?" Arjun asks her. Suddenely Rathod enter , he is angry mood. Rathod look at Riya and ask her , "Riya tujhe pata nhi ki , ya phir school mai sikhya nahi ki book kaise pakadte hai. ? "
Riya lift her head & look at brother , who is in angry mode. "Bhai , vo... arrr no Sir , vo , mera ye matlab nahi tha , nahi mai vo , janti hue , par vo maine vo ... " Riya fumbled & confused that what she want to say her brother. "Kaam kar rahi ho , to theek se karo, pehe le file ache se pakdo . " and raise his fingers on her. Riya look at file and realize ki hadbadi mai usne file ulti pakad li thi.
After ofc Shree hits Chotu in his stumack. Chotu stand still . While Riya laughing at them. finally Shree give up & rest himself piller. while Chotu look at them and ask "Shree kahi chale , badi bhook lagi hai yaar." Shree look at him & turn around & hit his head on piller , while Riya smile loudly and Chotu confusedly look at him. Rathod heard this , he come there to pick Riya. "Ye sab ho kya raha hai , Shree tum apne sir piller pe kyu maar rahe ho ? and Chotu tumhe ghar nahi jana ? Riya kya kar rahi ho yah aab tak , chalo..."
Shree ans him "Sir mere Sir main dard ho raha hai , bas isiliye ... " 😆
"Mai to bas jaa hi raha tha , bas Shree ko dekh ke ruk gaya" Chotu ans him.
Rathod turn around & look at his sister "To Miss , Riya Rathod , aapke paas koi ans hai, ki aap yaha abtak kyu hai?"
"Ha , mai vo aapka ... apka wait kar rahi thi." Riya ans him.
Rathod just look at trio & nodded in belif ki in teeno ka kuch nhi ho sakta. & goes from there & ask Riya to follow him. Riya bid them & hurridly goes behind her brother. After that Shree & Chotu goes to cafe & take there eveing breakfast. Shree look at bill & shocked "Udi baba , aaj 27th hai."
Chotu "To kya hua?"
Shree look at him in disbelif, "Are mere yaar kal Ri ka bdy hai."
Chotu "Wow , to kal hum celebrate karnge , kal to cake bhi hoga , cold-drinks bhi aur kya rakhe.?"
Shree "Tujhe khane ke alwa aur kuch yaad bhi reheta hai?" Are kal kaise celebrate kare ye soch."
They both decided plan and call Rathod & tell him everything , firstly Rathod don't angry , but Shree emotional blackmailed him , and Rathod aggress.
Shree look at Chotu smilingly & raise his thumb in victory mode. 👍🏼
INDEX

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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Oohh... heheheh smart shree... he hacked riya's fb account! 😆 I wonder whats going to happen to him when riya finds out 😛 Thank you for a great update.

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Part 2

Next Day at ETF Riya is coming to work alone. Rathod have some work. Arjun enjyng his cutting chai.
Riya look at watch & then at door. aftersmetime Riya look at watch again, its 12pm. Bt there is no sign of Chotu & Shree. Rathod comes in happily & look at his sister. "Riya un dono ne aah chutti li hai" Rathod inform her, knowing she wait for her buddies. Arjun reads some file & suddenely remebers Riya's bdy , he wish her. Now Riya on cloud nine. Early Mrng Rathod also wish her & feed her fav sweets. But Riya feel so bad because her 2 best buddies not there.
Here in another home situatied in outside of Mumbai two persons hurridly does there work. One person stands outside of big bunglow and clean namplate of bunglow. After cleaing he goes some steps back to check nameplate , "hmm now its shining" and goes inside. Name plate reads " Rathod's" yes Rathod's farmhouse. Shree & Chotu come early mrng to Rathod house when their best frind dozes off. Rathod handed them keys. & both now in Rathod's farmhouse to decorate house for Riya's bdy.
All arrangements are make, Now Shree gets bored & hide himself in his lappy. While Chotu seats on chair . Though Rathod sends event manager there to handle all , but Shree & Chotu take care all small small things & also guide & help them out. Suddenely Shree yells "Chotu come here." Chotu goes there. Shree shows him somthing in his lappy , "Are ye to Ri ka fb account hai" Chotu ans him. "Ha , pata hai , par maine use hack kiya hai , aur ye dekh , kya naam hai iss bande ka ha Arivand , lagta hai koi khaas hai , " Shree inform Chotu while looking at Riya 's profile.
"Are chod de vo sab" Chotu tell him. But Shree is Shree. He does somthing & then look at Chotu devilish smile. Chotu ask him what happened, Shree shows him Riya's status , Chotu see this & shock at core. It shows "Happiest day in my life , Love you Arjun , for entering my life... :) " Chotu hit on Shree's head lightly. "Pagal hai kya , agar Riya aur Arjun Sir ko pata chala na , tu kal teri shokesabha mai aane hoga hame." Chotu says to Shree.
"Are kuch nhi hoga , dekh tu , vo dono aaj kuch na kuch jarurr karnge , ijhaar to hoga hi , kya tune nhi dekha Chotu vo aakho hi aakho mai isshare , vo care , vo pyar . hamesha Ri ke saath rehena" Shree ask him. "Ha re , par tune sher ke muh mai haath daala hai." Chotu inform this & leaves from there to help worker. "Chotu tu dekh aaj us Arivand ko bhi maine bulaya hai , uski baat se to lagta hai ki vo Ri pe fida hai , aa jaayega yaha 1/2 hrs mai , phir dekhte hai bande ko. "Shree mumrmued to himself & close his laptop.

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