Chapter 166
next morning a-k go 2 khanna house 4 breakfast
n- are angadkripa tum dono , itne subah subah
a- mom vo actually n thn angad tell her abt kanan's offer
n-yeh to bauhat offer hai angad
d-ha bete , tumhe yeh offer accept karna chahiye
a- u sure mom
n- habeta
a- ok then
then all have breakfast
aaliya n kripa r talking abt goign 4 shopping
k- angad tum plezzzzz humme shopping lekar jaoge , actually vo driver holiday par gaya hai
a- kripa main driver nahi rockstar hu
k- watever , to tum chal rahe ho na plezzzz
a- no ways kripa tum to jaanti ho na i hate going shopping , n then last time i went shopping with u the next day i couldn't walk
k- angad vo to shaadi ke waqt tha , shaadi ki shopping bauhat lambi hoti hai but this is normal shopping
aa- plezzzzzzzzzzzzz bhai
a-(seriously) no!
k-plezzz plezzzzzz plezzzzz plezzzzzz
a-(a bit angry) kripa no means no!
k-(angry) fine!
aa- bhai ur useless! main prithvi ko phone karti hu vo zarur ha kahega
then aaliya called up prithvi
aa-prithvi main aur kripa shopping jaa rahe hai to tum humme pick karne aajao
p-aaliya shopping
aa-(shouts loudly) prithvi agar tum aaye nahi to main tumse ek hafte (1 week) tak nahi milungi
p-mane kab mana kiya , i m just comming
aa- thats better
then aaliya kept the phone
aa- kripan don't worry prithvi aa raha hai
k-lolz aaliya tumne finally prithvi ko blackmail karna seekhliya hai
aa-
angad's phone rings n he excuses himself n goes aside 2 answer the phone
after 5 mins he comes back
a- kanan ka phone tha aur maine usse ha kehdiya hai , ussne mujhe aapne office bulaya hai papers sign karne to main abhi jaa raha hu ,bye
d- angad nashta to karke jao
a- main kanan ke saath office main nashta karlunga
then angad left n after some time prithvi came n k,aa n p went 4 shopping
IN THE MALL..........
p- can v go home now main thak gaya hu
aa- prithvi tum roz jim jate ho aur 2 ghante exercise karte ho tab nahi thakte lekin shopping karte waqt bauhat jaldi thak jate ho
p-
k-aaliya i can't control anymore (n then aaliya n kripa burst put laughing)
p- tum dono has kyon rahi ho
k- sorry prithvi actually maine aur aaliya ne bet rakhata ki kya aaliya tumhe daat pati hai , n she just won the bet
aa- sooo soory prithvi but i didn't mean anythig that i said
n then aaliya hugged prithvi
p- aaliya tum bhi na
k- awwwww u both make such a cute couple
aa,p- thanx
p- but can v go n sit somewhere
aa- ya lets go 2 the cafeteriar there(he points out 2 a cafeteria)
they go 2 the cafeteria n sit there n ordersomething 2 eat
(the cafeteria is inside the mall itself)
they were talking normally went suddenlt aaliya saw angad n kanan coming out from a shop
aa-it that bhai?
kripa turned back n saw that it was ANGAD N KANAN
k- wat the hell is he doing with kanan jab maine kaha tha ki mujhe shoppin le jao tab mujhse rudely no kaha lekin is kanan ke saath to itna achhe se shopping kar raha hai
p- kripa chill ,there must b a reason
k- prithvi tum angad ke dpost ho tum to uske hi side loge na
aa- kripa just go n shout at bhai he deserves it
k-4get it aaliya , ab to angad ke liye kanan mujhse bhi zyada importan ho gaiye hai na
kripa left the shopping bags n walked out of the mall n ager while aaliya n prithvi went 2 angad n kanan
aaliya tapped angad's shoulders n angad turned back n was shocke 2 c aaliya n prithvi
aa-(angrily) hey bhai
a-ahhhhhh............ hey
kan- hi aaliya , hi prithvi
p- hi kanan
aa-bhai mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai
a- sure
aa- yaha nahi akele main
b4 angad could reply aaliya caught his hand n took him 2 a corner
aa-wat is al this bhai? aapne to kaha tha ki aapko shopping nahi jana hai jab kripa ne pucha aur yaha aap kanan ke saath shopping kar rahe hai
a- aaliya chill mujhe explain karne ka mauka to do
aa- enought bhai! aap kya explain karenge , aapko pata hai kripa ko kitna bra laga
a-kripa kaha hai?
aa- vo chali gaiye
aaliya was abt 2 walk away when angad caught her hand
a- aaliya lisen 2 me na, actually kanan is new here aur usse shopping ki koi jagah nahi malumthi isliye i couldn't say no 2 her
aa- keep all ur explanations 4 kripa , n kripa was rite abt 1 thing
a-wat?
aa- that kanan is more impotant 4 u than kripa is
a- aaliya u know that kripa means the world 2 me
aa-(rudely) even i thought so but now i guess i was wrong
n aaliya walked off n went 2wards kana n prithvi
aa-prithvi ghar chale?
p-sure
kan- bye aaliya
aaliya said bye rudely n walked off
p- uhhhh... vo actually she is in a bad mood isliye....
kan- its ok i understand
p-bye
n then prithvi went with aaliya n went 2 his office (just like in the show they have an event management company)
prithvi reached office n was on his laptop doing some work when his cell started ringing
p-hello
a- yaar prithvi hepl me plez!!!!!!!
p- tumhari galti hai angad , u shouldn't have lied 2 kripa
a- but i didn't tell her only abt it so where does the question come of lieing
p- angad , girls hate it when theirboyfriend or husband hides things from them n specially when the matter includes another girl
a- main sife kana ko mall dikha raha tha koynki vo naiye hai yaha aur usse shopping ke liye koi malls pata nahi the
p- so u weren't shopping with her
a- no, u know prithvi how much i hate shoppign with girls
p- wahi mian soch raha tha ki tum kripa ko naa karke kisis aur ke saath shopping kar sakte the
a- to ab kya karu?
p- trust me angad is waqt kripa bauhat gusse main hogi she won't mind slapping u
a-
p- but don't worry ek baar mere aur aaliy ke beech bhi aisa hi jhagda hua tha
a-how long did the fight go on?
p- for 1 month
a-
p- anyways pehle to tu kripa ko call karne ki koshish kar
a- she won't pick up the phone
p- mujhe pata hai , lekin phir usse chance nahi milna chahiye yeh kehne ke liye ki ' tum mujhe phone kar ke bhi sorry keh sakte the na'
a- ur smart prithvi!
p- weel i got lots of experience with aaliya
a- agli baar jab mera aur kripa ka jhagda hoga to main tumhe hi phone karunga
p- sure aur ghar jate waqt take a red rose bouque 4 kripa
a- but there is another problem
p-ab kya?
a- mujhe abhi urgently recording par jana hai n i can;t miss it
p- god! itne twists to kisi k-serial main bhi nahi honge
a- main yaha musibat main hu aur tu mujhpar has raha hai kaisa dost hai tu yaar
p-sorry
a-its ok
p- anyways tu jald se jald recording khatam karke ghar jaa
a- ok bye , n thanx alot
p-ur welcome
then angad finished his recodings by 10:30 at night n he drove home fast with a bouque of red roses
when he reached home he went 2 the room n saw that kripa was fast asleep on the sofa n the v was still on
a-(thinking) tv dekhte dekhte so gaiye how cute
then he picked her up in his arms n took her 2 the bedroom n put her on the bed n put the blanket on her
he changed his clothes n went down 2 the friedge 2 see if there was something 4 dinner
he eats something n goes 2 sleep
preview: angad says sorry n kripa's reaction!
it took me 1 and a half hrs 2 typ this part n now my fingures r paining
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hey i m here n i will post the next part in 30-45 mins
18 years ago
hey yaar wen r u gna cont?????
18 years ago
man ur fanfic is soo good continue soon
18 years ago
pritika where r u? pls cont soon
18 years ago
phew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i just finally finished reading ur whole fanfic, trust it took a while - i think i've been reading it for a couple weeks now and its ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... awesome whenever i read it start to blush! It is really good and plz cont. soon!
18 years ago
[QUOTE=hot_girl_2525] if u eva want 2 complain abt pritika/kripa them just tell me...by the way am her granny...i'll fix her easily 4 u [/QUOTE] ooooooooo main to darr gaiye granny
18 years ago
fab continue soon can't wait 2 c kripa's reaction
18 years ago
[QUOTE=hot_girl_2525] if u eva want 2 complain abt pritika/kripa them just tell me...by the way am her granny...i'll fix her easily 4 u [/QUOTE] hi granny ji namaste pls tell her to post on time bcoz i love to read her ff by the way whts ur age
18 years ago
omg omg i just read like the last 50 pgs and im finally caufht up and blushing like crazy all those parts were sooooooo cute and romantic i cant stop blushing..lol...plzzz cnt soon himani
18 years ago
pritoo that was a wonderful part!!hope ur fingers get better soon!!
18 years ago