Chapter 9
kripa is shiverin cause of the fact that she did someones accident . the road is empty n dark , the breez is cool n fast . Somehow kripa builds up her courage 2 walk up2 that person (she is still in shock) . As she reaches 2 that person she sees that the person's body is fully socked of blood , she turns the face of the person n is shocked 2 c that the person is none othere than aaliya's brother angad!!!!!
Kripa is out of her shock now .She immidiately manages 2 get angad 2 her cars n drives 2 the hospital.
hospital scene
(doctor=d)
k-doctor plez inhe dekhea
d- ohmy god! yeh to famous rockstar angad khanna hai aur app bhi rockstar kripa sharma hai rite?
k-app vo sab chodeye doctor filhaal aap angad 2 thek kijiye
then angad is taken in the operation theater
n outside kripa is cryin
after 30 mins the doctor comes out with a sad face
k-doctor kya hua angad ko, vo thek to hai na?
d-silent
k-kaheye na doctor angad thek to hai na?
d-i m sorry miss kripa par...
k-par kya doctor?
d-vo coma main chale gaye hai
kripa-wat?
d-ha
k-(starts 2 cry misrebaly)hey nahi ho sakta doctor ......main aalya ko kya javab dungi ..... nahi yeh nahi ho sakta .....nahi......nahi
n sayin this kripa faints
sorry this part was short but i promise that the next part will b long
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Comments (11)
i better rite the next part b4 u all put me i coma
19 years ago
are amna your crush is in coma naa..she has put my husband in coma
19 years ago
pritika u better bring angad out of comma other wise i will not gona leave u my first crush is in comma ...........
19 years ago
tum dono ne yeh milkar kya khichdi pakai hai??yeh bahut buri baat hai..tumne angad ko coma mein dhal diya
19 years ago
nice fan-fic....continue soon
19 years ago
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19 years ago
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19 years ago
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx sooooooooooooooooo much all of u
19 years ago
wow the 9th and 10th parts r very good, love it cutenash38654.251400463
19 years ago
to tune mera advise le he liya
19 years ago