Chapter 6
kripa goes home in her black sports car . When she reaches home there is a call on her cell
tring tring tring
(someone=s)
k-hello
s-kaise hai meri gudiya
k-bhaya mujhe aapse baat nahi karni hai
s-arre maine sorry keh raha hu na
k-i don't care
s-gudiya tumhe to pata hai na ki vo meeting kitni important thi main chakar bhi usse pospone nahi kar sakta tha
k-main aapke sab bahane jaanti hu
s-gudiya meri baat to suno .........n he is interupted by kripa
k-muhje kuch nahi sunna the point is that aapne mera itna bada show miss kardiya , pata hai main kitni nervous thi , mujhe aapke moral support ki bauhat zarurat thi par aap vaha the hi nahi
s-ab mein ne sorry kaha n gudiya
k-i don't care mujhe aapse baat nahi karni n bye
sayin this kripa cuts the phone n goes 2 her room n when she ons the light of the room she is surprised 2 c the hole room filled willed flowers non the table r her favorite choclates
she looks around the room n a smile spreads on her face n she says....
k-bhaya bahar aa jayea chupne ki koi jarurat nahi
then v c the face of a person who is commin out from bhind the door n first v c his eyes then v c his nose then lips n finally v c his full face n it is the very sweet karthik!!!!!!!!!!
(karthik=ka)
ka-sorry gudiya (n he catches his ears)
kripa bursts out laughin n says its ok bhaya n next time don't take me 2 seriously
ka-matlab tum mujhse naraz nahi thi
k-(makes a innocent face) maine kab kaha ki min aapse naraz hu n she begines 2 laugh once again
ka-agar tum mujhse naraz nahi ho to phir main yeh sare choclates vapas leta hu
k-nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
n kripa runs 2wards her cholates n hugs them
ka-(laughing) kripa tum ab tak bachi hi ho jab bhi choclate dekhti ho tu kise ke saath share nahi karti
k-bhai aapko to pata hi hai ki mujhe choclates kitneeeeeeee pasand hai
ka-aur jab tumhare pati hoga aur vo tumse choclate mangega to tum kya karo ge
k-main......main......main.....main usse pit dungi
ka laughs n says - vaise kal tumhare college ka aa khri din hai na
k- are ha bhaya aur ek baat vo actually kya hai n ki college ke baad aaliya vapas mumbai ja rahi hai , n i wantd 2 spend sometime time with her afterall she is my best friend, so i invited her 2 stay at our house 4 atleast a week i hope u dont mind
ka- aaliya bhi mere chooti behan ki taha hai n y should i mind it infact i would love 2 have aaliya over here n spend time with both my sisters
k-thankuuuuuuu bhai
ka-anyways gudiya its late now n u should sleep now
k-ok bhaya good nite
kripa changes into her night dress n is not sleepy so she decideds 2 c tv
she keeps changin channels n finally she stops at a music channel the song chaska is goin n after it gets over another song starts n it is of ANGAD
the song is jo tum nahi paas
kripa(to herself)-yeh to angad hai aaliya ka bhai,vaise maine yeh soocha nahi but he looks soooo cute n hot ,but isse dekhke to lagta hai ki bauhat hi attitude hoga n anyways boys who look good r very proudy of them selves
aftersometime kripa feels sleepy n goes 2 sleep
preview: ANGAD'S ENTRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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actually i have ritten many fan fics but this is the first fan fic fan fic that i have started on my own i have ritten parts in fan fic romantic getaway n some other but this fan fic is started itself by me
19 years ago
anywayz i read all the parts and they were very very gud Loved it !! i do'nt belive this is ur first one u r too gud at this
19 years ago
Oh so sorry for u Pritu dear take care and plz take ur time there is no hurry Luv u Nash
19 years ago
pritika take ur time sweety take care lub maryam
19 years ago
soooooooooooo sorry i could not continue actually a relative of my died n so i had 2 go there i promise i will continue 2day n thanx 4 being so patient with me
19 years ago
that was a really gooood startinggggggg plz contttt ssoooooooooooooooooooooon
19 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon....luv it pritika
19 years ago
continue yaar tumhari kahani atak gayi wanna read about agnad's entry
19 years ago
actually i will continue tommorrow
19 years ago
thankuuuuuuuu divi n don't worry i will continue very very soon
19 years ago