Chapter 14

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PART 14
Everyone is tensed..
Kt is miserable..
Laksh is Horrified..and is thinking who it could be..
L: (tensed) kaun ho sakta hai yeh?? kya chata hai?? kya dushmani hai iski hamaare saath..
Sahil: (keeps his hand on laksh's shoulder) laksh beta.. dusri baar uska phone aaye..to soch samajh ke faisla lena beta...
L: (nods) ji papa..
The phone rings, and laksh puts it on speaker..
L: hello?? (he hear's pulkit crying, and gets tears in his own eyes, and whispers "pulkit"..everyone is shocked)
Phone Guy: heraan ho?? mat ho..kyunki agar tumne mujhe meri woh cheez nahi di..to yeh aakhri baar hogi ke tum ya koi bhi, is bache ki aawaaz sun rahe ho samjhe...
L: (tensed) nahi..tumhe jo chahiye main dene ko tayiaar hoon..
Phone Guy: (cackles) apni jaan de sakte ho.. dekho mujhe pata hai ki tumhara javab kya hai..par mujhe aur kushi hogi agar tum apne khudke muu se bolo..
-Everybody is nodding "no"..and so is kt-
L: (in confidence) HAAN...
Phone Guy: (cackles) very good.. ab kisi ko bahar ke darwaaze par bhejo..
Laksh turns..and starts to leave..
Phone guy: ruko laksh.. maine kaha kisi ghar wale ko..tumko nahi..samjhe..
-Laksh stops, and archita goes-
Archita opens the door and see's pulkit on the doorstep's, she bends down to pick him up, and right at the moment..laksh is shot through the window..
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GUYS PLEASE TELL ME IF I SHOULD CONTINUE..
THANKS!!
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Comments (3)

thank u guys.. the next part is coming up soon, now!

17 years ago

wow i love ur ff it is great with all the twists

17 years ago

wow what a twist in the perfect fairytale continue soon

17 years ago

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