Chapter 12

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PART 12
-The doctor had discharged laksh. he is welcomed home-
-Laksh is in his room, in SN-
-Laksh hears a baby crying, and gets confuzed-
-he decides to go see where it is-
L: (in the hallway, wondering) yeh..bache ki aawaaz kaha se..??
-Finally..he reaches damini's room, and saw a baby lying on the bed crying-
L: (picks the baby) Arerererere..kyun ro rahe hain aap?? kya ho gaya?? (he play's with the baby sweetly, until the baby falls asleep)
-kt comes to the room, and is shocked to see laksh there-
L: (looks at kt, and confuzingly says) kt..yeh bacha yaha.....!! kiska hai yeh??
-Everyone enter's the room, and decide's to tell himthe truth about himself-
L: koi batao naa? kiska hai yeh?? koi bataiye naa..
T: Laksh..yeh bacha tera aur krishna tulsi ka hai..
-laksh was finding it hard to believe-
L: (confuzed) kya..?? mera aur kt ka bacha?? yeh kaisa mazaak hai?? kt.. tum..!! daadi..yeh mera bacha nahi ho sakta..meri to shaadi bhi nahi hui hai ab tak.. aap yeh kaisi baate kar rahi hai?? daadi main..
K: (sadly) baa theek kaih rahi hai laksh.. yeh humara hi bacha hai..
-laksh touches his head in pain. he starts having more and more flashbacks of the accident. everyone is worried. nakul and mihir go and catch laksh, since he was turning unconsious-
L: (before he turns unconsious) ab..yaad aaya.. accident........ab...yaad.........aaya....(he turns unconsious before saying anything else)
K: LAKSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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IN THE HOSPITAL
-Laksh is admitted in the ICU room-
-Kt is not able to control herself from crying-
-Everyone is tryng to get her to calm down-
-doctor comes out of laksh's room-
Sahil: doctor ab kaisa hai laksh??
D: abhi ghabraane ki koi baat nahi hai..woh bilkul theek hai..bas ab puri tarha se theek hone ke liye, unhe regular yeh dawaayieya khaani hongi..(the doctor hands sahil a list of medicine)
S: ji doctor saab..
K: Doctor..kya hum laksh se mil sakte hain??
D: of course..kyn nahi?? par abhi woh bihosh hain.. par aap mil sakte hain..
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM
-Laksh is still unconsious-
kt goes and sits beside laksh..and gets a hold of his hand..
K: (softly) laksh.. (she says sweet thing about laksh, and apologisis for any of her stupid mistakes, when she made him feel bad, and finishes it off with) "I Love You Laksh", aaj ke baad main aisa kabhi nahi karoongi.. mujhe maaf kardo laksh..
-as she finishes a tead from her cheek falls on laksh's forehead-
L: (mummurs) kt..main bhi tumse bahut pyar karta hoon, kt.. par tum maafi kyun maang rahi ho? isme tumhari kya galti..
-they have a sweet moment-
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-Laksh is back home, with his fully gained memory =] yay)
He sweetly holds his baby boy, and plays with him..
Laksh and Kt..love each other, and most of all their baby, and afamily ofcourse.
-Happy Ending, after many Twists-
=]
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SO GUYS?? HOW DID YOU LIKE MY "12 PART" FANFIC.. LOL..
SO YOU GUYS WANT ME TO ADD ANOTHER TWIST, OR KEEP IT LIKE A HAPPY ENDING, AND MAKE ANOTHER FANFIC
PLEASE REPLY..
THANKS!!
LOVE,
ZINU =] Wink Zinu2939206.7625462963

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ok..guys..i decided...to.... MAKE ANOTHER TWIST it'll be up by some time today =]
Zinu2939206.8524305556

17 years ago

That parts were really cute with laksh adn baby boy in it. I want you to write more. Don't stop! i want to read your next twist. do write the next part soon.

17 years ago

why was kt crying? how did they get in the new house ? didnt read all to long but very very intresting. i love it but hate reading on comp.

17 years ago

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