Chapter 4

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PART 4
-Tulsi has gone to the Mandir-
-Meanwhile.. Laksh is sitting on the bench, worried for Kt-
-The doctor comes-
D: Uh.. aap us patient ke pati hain??
L: ji haan doctor saab.. kya hua??
D: aap zara mere saath aieye.. mere office mein..
-Laksh follows the doc to his office-
-Doctor and Laksh have a talk about kt.. But we don't hear it-
-when Laksh gets out of the room.. he seems confuzed-
-Tulsi is searching for Laksh-
T: (worried) Laksh..?? Laksh..?
T: Laksh tu yahan hai?? kabse dhoond rahi hoon main tujhe..
L: kyun daadi.. kya hua??
T: Laksh Krishna Tulsi ko hosh aa gaya hai.. woh tujhse milna chaahti hai..
L: (a lil happily) kya?? kt ko hosh..
-Laksh and Tulsi go towards her room-
L: Kt..
K: laksh..
-Laksh gently holds her hand-
K: laksh.. kya tumne baa ko..
L: (with sorrow) nahi kt.. tumhari aise halat mein main..
K: bata do laksh.. haan.. bata do..
L: par kt tum..
K: meri chinta mat karo laksh.. tum bas baa ko sab kuch bata do..
L: (nods) theek hai kt..
-he starts to leave-
K: laksh.. agar unhe bura lage to..
L: (shekey voice (because he is crying)) main jaanta hoon kt.. agar unhe bura lage to tumhare paas le aana..
-kt gives a lil smile-
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OUTSIDE HER ROOM
T: kaise hai ab krishna.. laksh..
L: (with his head bowed down..sadly says) Tulsi daadi.. mujhe aapko kuch..
-he begins to weep-
L: daadi..mujhe aapko kuch kehna hai..
T: haan..bol..kya baat hai??
L: Daadi woh..
-They go into flashback's-
FLASHBACK:
-In Switzerland-
L: (happily) Kt sambhalo.. gir jaao gi..
K: haan haan..main to..
-just as she is about to finish her sentence she falls down the stairs-
L: (screams) KT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
K: (in pain) laksh... *aahh* laksh...
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STILL IN FLASHBACK
IN THE HOSPITAL
L: (worried) Doctor?? How is kt now??
D: Look.. she is abseloutely fine..
L: And how is the baby??
D: dekhiye bacha jab paida hoga, to uski metal condition theek nahi hogi.
-echo (in his head): bacha jab paida hoga, to uski metal condition theek nahi hogi.. uski mental condition theek nahi hogi..uski mental condition theek nahi hogi-
-A tear sadly falls down his cheek-
L: (sadly whispers) kt...
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IN KT'S ROOM
L: (sadly) Kt..
K: (crying) laksh.. yeh kya ho gaya laksh??
K: (crying) Jo khushi hum kal baa ko sunane wale thei..woh khushi hi hamse chali gaye..
L: (sadly) dekho kt.. (wiped off her tears.. and hugs her).. hum isme kya kar sakte hai kt?? jab upar wala hume yeh khushi nahi de sakta.. isme hum kya kare?? yeh hi kismat hai kt..
K: (crying) par laksh.. baa ko agar yeh pata chal gaya to..woh toot jaayengi laksh..woh toot jayengi..
L: (sadly) kt dekho.. hum unse agar yeh baat chupate hain.. to yeh baat kitne der thak chhup payegi?? kabhi naa kabi to hume..
K: (crying) main jaanti hoon laksh.. par..
-kt can't control herself from crying..she is unable to finish her sentence-
L: (sweetly) shh.. kt.. rona band karo.. hum kuch sochte hain.. shhh...
L: dekho kt.. main jaanta hoon ke yeh khabar ek maa ke liye kitna dukh laa sakti hai.. ek maa hi hoti hai jisko uske bacho ke feeling kaa ehsaas hota hai.. ek maa hi bacho ke liye sabkuch hai.. aur ek maa hi hamesha unke saath rehti hai..
-As he finishes tears fall out of his eyes-
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WE ARE OUT OF FLASHBACK
T: (horrified) he bhagwaan.. main samajh sakti hoon ki kt ki kya halat hui hogi..
-Laksh is crying-
T: (cries) jaane thakur ji ne aisa kyun kiya..
-Laksh just walks away crying in anger- Zinu2939204.7836226852

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Yes u guys r right.. i have to post this into the FanFic section.. but i am helpless.. i tried so many times, but it says, i can't since i don't have atleast 25 posts so i will have to later on.. sorry about this everyone.. but i am unable to do anything about it.. NEXT PART COMING SOON!!!!!!! THERE IS GOING TO BE A BIG TWIST IN THE STORY!!!!!! ENJOY!!! HOPE YOU LIKE IT!! THANKS!!

17 years ago

great fanfic..but dnt the mods say no more fanfics here..you have to post it in the Fanfic section..right..

17 years ago

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