Chapter 17

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Part 16
Maan's POV:
The Moment
 
The Moment!
The moment had arrived
As it would have eventually come
It arrived without a knock on the front door of his heart
It arrived without a notification or a messenger
It arrived so suddenly that he could not fathom its changes
But it had arrived
The moment had arrived.
 
It arrived
Screaming to emerge from his heart and his soul
Bringing along the subtle changes in his heart
Taking him by surprise completely
As far as he could remember
It was just yesterday, when he shined in his ego and arrogance
While today brought the restlessness, the fear and the possible separation

Fate had finally arrived at this doorstop
Making him realize her importance and her value in his life
Realization that he was nothing without her
His life did not exist without her
How much he missed her
How much he craved for her
Only he knew how he felt
Alone and helpless without her

But was this realization enough?
Was this understanding enough?
Unfortunately it was not enough
Because the moment had arrived!
For him to feel the pain
The pain that he bestowed upon her
The pain that her innocent self suffered for all this years
His tantrums and her silence
His humiliation and her love
His anger and her submissiveness
His rejection and her acceptance
It was always his ego in front of her self-less love
It was always his arrogance in front of her humble silence
And so today the moment had arrived
For him to suffer, silently in the repentance  of his deeds!

Rachana



Maan is waking up whole night just watching Geet's side of bed and remembering there moments in past'.. every time he just see's how she has always submitted herself to all his wishes and how he has just denied her' denied eventhe smallest thing she had expected'..

 

He tries to argue his deeds but he is out of reasons'. He doses of almost in the morning'.

 

He wakes up at 10am by the call from Adi in office who was reminding him of his meeting as he did not show up'..

 

Maan decided to get ready and go for work' he needed the diversion'. He himself did not believe his condition' just because Geet has left for London'. He needs to find out that too'

 

Geet on the other side has joined her office and makes herself busy in work and in the evening she makes sure she is not alone and the three of them just have fun. She knows if she is alone, Maan is going to dominate her heart and mind and she will not let him do so.

 

Man has many resources and using his resource he tries to find out Geet's where about in London' but the office is not ready to release any of it's employee's informations to stranger and if he claims their relation' how can he accept that Maan Sing Khurana don't know where about of his own wife' he is not sure even if in her office anyone knows about their relation'.

 

No body knows his wife in his office' he never bothered about bringing her to any public gathering with him'.

He again gets completely frustrated by his own deeds'. What have I done, she is my wife and I never bothered to give her any place, no one knows who is Maan Singh Khurana's wife

 

 

Maan makes himself busy in work'. He had failed to find about Geet'. He will'. he is sure but it was not easy as their relation was not public.

 

He comes late at night and again seeing the room empty, no Geet'. All she has left for him was her one dress that she had changed' that's the only source for him to feel her' Pain runs thru him badly'

 

"Geet' why did you do this to me' mujhe kuch bhi nahi bataya tumne' aisee saza kyun di" his heart was almost crying'''

 

He again gets lost in their past and every time he thinks about them he realizes more and more as how he had always been so rough and insensitive to her and their relation and how many times she had always tried to calm him down with no error on her side'..

 

How he had pushed her away just to hide his weakness' how she had always calm him down by her presence when he had been restless to see her and what he has given her in return' just pain' he was all alone in night and just lost in reading their past'.

 

Which only gave him pain' pain of why did he actually did what ever he did'. He finds no reason even if he tries to'..

 

Next day Maan cancels all his meetings just to devote all his time to find about Geet' he put required resources on work and if Maan Singh Khurana has placed all his timing for one work he is bound to get success and he is able to find out where is Geet in London and he is able to get her Landline home number and her office number'..

 

The moment he gets her number, his happiness and thought are flying with no bound'..

 

He is back home early'.

 

Dadima:"Maan aap kahan rehte hain aaj kal' koi kahabr nahi' na hee hamara haal puchtee hain"

 

Maan:"Dadima.. I was busy in something badly'. App kaisee hain"

 

Dadima:"aaiye baithiye' baten kijiye hamare saath" and she takes him with her'.. and then Annie comes and she involves him too'..

 

It is almost 10 pm when he is able to enter his room'

 

"No she must be busy at this hour'. I will call her after some hours'. She comes home late'" He has unaware that he has suddenly started caring of not troubling her' or putting any trouble to her'.

 

Two days he has just devoted his time  realizing how much trouble and pain he has  given her and she has took it all' he somewhere within promises to not put any trouble to her'.

 

He is again sitting there all alone'. He goes to the dresses where she sites and remembers how she gets ready'. Thinking about her he wants her near him and then starts his pain'. Geet is no where near him'. His heart gets tore apart'.

 

His thought them wanders to their marriage'.. he realizes, he married her just because he was not able to take that she will be someone else's'.. She never came to him, though he knew she just loved him she never forced herself on him' he did' he forced himself on her and then what did he do'.

 

"I just blamed her for everything'.. I was everywhere on fault and I was punishing her' and for what' why was I revenging her'. What had she done' what was her fault' only that she accepted my proposal and married me just as I had wished"

 

The more he thought' more pain and guilt gathered him' he became more and more restless of the thought that he had put her in so much pain for no reason'. "how could I do this to anyone' that too to Geet, who had always bowed down in front of all my wishes"

 

He decides to give no more pain too Geet'.. "Geet just be back and you will get your Maan back' Maan that you have been waiting all along"

 

"I have lived just for myself and you have lived just for my wishes' Not any more Geet' just come back'. I will live for you and your wishes' I promise Geet, just come back soon.. even a moment without you is killing me"

 

 

It's 2 am here and around 10 pm in London'. Next day is a national holiday in London so the three of them plans to enjoy together' Geet wants to be with them till she gets tired and fall asleep without having anytime to think'.

 

She is in the kitchen with Meera preparing favorite dishes of her friends'. Yash is as usual making jokes and flirting casually with girls' he has taken upon his responsibility to take care of girls'..

 

His jokes always divert Geet and she really enjoys it' they keep fighting too'.

 

While Geet is in Kitchen and Yash in living room the phone rings

 

Yash before picking phone:"Geet I guess your hubby is there"

 

Geet is pretty sure Maan can never be there' she knows Maan can find about her if he wants' she knows this is a small task for him but why will he' why will he even try to find her number'. He doesn't even knows her cell number why will he put any effort to find her number here'

 

Geet:"Ohh really' go ahead and enjoy talk with my hubby then"

 

Yash laughs and picks the phone

 

Yash:"Hello'"

 

Maan is really upset with a male voice' his information cannot be wrong'. this is Geet's number then who is this

 

Maan:"this is Geet Khurana and Meera Sharma's number right'. Who are you"

 

Yash:"yes it is'. But you called so 1st tell me who are you"

 

Maan is really angry on the person otherside'..

 

Maan:"I am Maan Singh Khurana'. Husband of Geet Khurana' can I talk to Geet and who are you"

 

Yash:"Ohh sorry sir' I am extremely sorry' I am Yash Mehra, Geet's friend"

 

Maan's blood is boiling' he remembers Yash in a flash' he is the same boy who came to maary Geet and now what he is doing in her flat at this hour

 

Yash: "Geet call from your husband" he takes the phone and run to the kitchen

 

Geet not believing him:"ohh really' as I said, go ahead and talk to him then"

 

Yash:"Geet' I am serious, take the phone'"

 

Geet:"No, I know your entire trick'. My husband is too busy these days to call me"

 

Yash:"He is really there' busy hain to kya , can he not call his wife"

 

Yash places the phone so near to Geet that Maan is able to hear all their conversation'.

 

Geet:"See I am making your favorite pratha for you and you are trubling me yash"

 

She takes the phone from Yash and just swtches it off.

Next to be continued

 
tellyme2011-11-14 07:56:27

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Gr8 Update.. I hope Maan understands that Geet doesn't expect him to call or inquiry about her.. She has lost all her hopes on him..

13 years ago

Are we going to get the update today??LuvTCAtiffa

13 years ago

oh gosh! geet disconnects the ph hmmm

13 years ago

awesome part dear...

iam eager to know the next part...

continue soon

13 years ago

eagerly waiting for next updateplz give update soon

13 years ago

i think it will shatter maan morecontinue soon

13 years ago

hi i just came across ur ff and had to read it in one go... simply amazing.
i sent u a buddy request, please add me to your pm list..
i know i shouldnt feel bad for maan but im a hopless romantic and hope they work it out soon.
cant wait for the update
P.S if you have written other ffs please send me the linksMsMovielover2011-11-15 07:12:37

13 years ago

superb updateloved itcontinue soon

13 years ago

Update!!! UPDATE !!!! UPDATE !!!! & UPDATE !!!

13 years ago

Maan the Devdas... good to read.. loved the final convo.. how Geet said i'm making ur favorites but u r troubling me and cut the call... he is going to seeth in anger..

13 years ago

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