Chapter 9

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Hi All,

 

Thanks so much for your wonderful comments. I really wanted to reply to each of you but I was stuck with some thing else. So as I am late I wanted to make update 1st.

 

But as most of you have same thing in mind ' Maan's act.

 

Yes, you all are right; he did all in to just finish up his restlessness and in his Ego. He loves her but fails to realize it in his ego. His ego is overpowering his emotions but still when she was going to get married he could not take it and by marrying her, he just gave peace to his mind that she will not go anywhere.

 

He is used to always take Geet as granted.

 

 

Many Many Happy Dipawali to all of you.

 

Thanks

--Anu

Part 8
 

Everyone was shocked with Maan's act. Dadima could not believe what her Grandson just did. Geet is in complete shock too, unable to understand everything that happened. She touched her Maan and feel Sindur on it, tears just rolls down her eyes "what have happened to him"

 

Dadima:"Maan aap hosh me to hain' aapko pata bhi hai aapne kya kiya hai'."

 

Maan:"Main bilkul hosh me hoon' whatever I did was only after everyone accepted my proposal to Geet, so what's wrong in it. When both of us are ready for marriage, all of you are ready for it'. to phir'.."

 

After lots of discussion, everyone knew Maan will anyhow take Geet with him as he have married to her, so to make things calm they request him to give them some hours and they arranged marriage in temple. Dadim was too angry on Maan to behave like this but for Geet , if she is going to be her Bahu she should do everything for her.

 

So in hurry all the arrangement was done for marriage the same day in mandir. Rano brought whatever jewelry and other stuff she had made for Geet. They arranged for garland and mangalsutra and then in temple proper marriage was done'.

 

Geet did not know whatever was going around'..  she had only one thing in mind "why did he do this"

 

But in temple when Maan again placed Sindur on her Maang a kind of soothing feeling ran withing her, as if this is what she had dreamt whole her life and was sure the day will never come. Maan put Mangalsutra on her and they took pheras. So the marriage was done.

 

Dadima in the meantime asked and directed Annie to make all the arrangement to welcome Geet as Bahu of Khurana Mansion. Annie was completely shocked of this but Dadima asked her to calm down as they need to make arrangements first.

 

Rano was crying badly'. Whenever she looked at Maan she had a kind of request in her eyes.

 

Mohinder had a kind of faith in Maan but Brij was most concerned and he went to talk to Dadima.

 

Brij:"Dadima' Geet ka kyal rakhiyega'. Maan kabhi kabhi"

 

Dadima:"app bilkul fikr na karen'. Maan se to hum baad me baat karenge per Geet meri jimedaree hai' uska khya rakna, uskee har khusi abb hamara farz hai'"

 

Maan was quiet' his mind had an unknown peace that Geet is now going nowhere but it got surfaced with whatever he had to do today to get Geet marrying him' his ego had been broken into pieces'

 

So, all three left. Maan was driving, Geet was made to sit next to him and Dadima who was completely upset with maan sat in the back seat.

 

 

Geet saw Maan, he was driving the car with no expression' she could not read what he was thinking' he looked calm and was concentrating on road like any normal day, but Geet very well knew that it was not a normal day, everything has changed suddenly..

 

They were going together to his house and husband and wife which were beyond her imagination.

 

"I don't know why he did it'. Itna gussa!!! Gusse me shadi ker li, aisa bhi koi kerta hai kya' per aab, aab kya hoga'. Main to phir bhi sab sabhal loongee'. Inke tewar ko bardast kerne kee adat hai mujhe per inka kya' he just hate me like anything to jindagee bhar mujhe bardast bhi kaise karenge'.apne aas pass"

 

They reached Khurana Mansion, Geet was so lost and confused that she did not even realize she has entered a huge mansion. She was just looking down unaware of the elegant surrounding and walked with dadima. Annie had done all the preparation and so geet was welcomed with all the rituals. Maan just stood there least interested.

 

When Geet entered the hall she realized how huge and elegant it was. So sophisticated, completely different class then her own, then her eyes went on Maan. He was quietly standing and she new there was storm going within his calmness' this was scaring her more'. His showing anger was better she thought that moment' she had so many questions in her mind and she needed the answer' she will gather her guts when they are alone' being alone in a room with him, that too when anger is boiling within him made Geet shiver from within'..

 

When both were lost, one in anger and other in thought of consequences of anger Dadima called out.

 

Dadima:"Maan aabb aap Geet ko Goud me utha ker puja gahr tak le jayenge'. Phir who diwar pe apne hhathon se sindur ka chap lagayengee " (This ritual taken from GHSP)

 

Maan: "What???"

 

"Dadima kyun mere jaan ke peeche pari hain'. So much happened today, is that not enough to boil his anger" thought Geet.

 

Dadima: "Marriage is a responsibility' you have to do all these rituals.. itne shauk se shadi kee hai aapne abb rasme bhi kijiye"

 

Maan knew Dadima was really upset with him, he said nothing just went near Geet and picked her up in his arm'. But the moment he picked her in his arm, something ran within Geet, so near to him in his arm, she hesitantly placed her hands around his neck and the moment she did it'. Maan felt it'. He just closed his eyes, not wanting to accept what went within him at that moment.

 

He opened his eyes and simply walked to where Dadima took them.

 

While their room was being decorated, of which both of them were unaware Geet was taken By Annie.

 

Annie: "Geet how come everything so sudden' I mean ekdum se shadi"

 

Geet had no answer, she just smiled'.

 

Annie: "Accha' since when are you guys seeing each other' I mean Bhai never ever mentioned it"

 

Geet thought "seeing each other????"

 

Annie:"Getting shy hunn'. Per raat me mat sharmana"

 

Geet: "Raat mein, kyun? "

 

Annie: "as if you don't know baby, every girls dream with marriage' their first night' Make it special"

 

Geet: "What? "

 

Maan had straight away went to Gym to avoid Dadimas Question'. "not today"'

 

After doing his rigorous exercise, continousy thinking of how he had to bend in front of all due to Geet. He had to bend on his knees to get Geet. Now that Geet was with him, someone taking her away was not his concern but all that he had done to remove his concern was taking on him'.

 

"I will never forgive you Geet, never ever for what you made me do today"

 

Geet was then taken to the well decorated room'. The moment she placed her leg inside the room, she felt different' the thought that it was Maan's room, completely private to him and she was entering it'. How much he hated her interference and today she was going to enter and stay here'.

 

The already immensely elegant room was beautifully decorated for them' she was seated in a huge luxurious bed.

 

And everyone left, closing the door slightly, leaving her to wait for Maan' She shivered'.

 

She stayed their lost in her same question and confusion when it was 11pm and Maan entered the room.

 

The moment he entered, Geet's heart skipped the beat "what now?? "

 

He came near the bed, not saying anything' Geet collected herself holding her knees tight'. He was quiet and calm which was scaring her more' he simply collected his pillow, took the blanket from closet and walked out of his room,

 

Geet just kept looking at his back as he left.

 

But Dadima was in hall. She came to Maan "AApne shadi kee hai Geet se' usse kamre me akele chor ker kahin nahi jayenge"

 

Maan;"Dadima"

 

She held his hand and took him to his room "You will share this room and bed both with Geet'. Always remember one thing, it was you who asked for Geet's hand and married her'. I hope aap hamaree baat ka maan rakhenge Maan"

 

Next to be continued

 
 
 
Thanks for your like and super duper comment for the last update. I know Maan is wrong and that is the story, so how can I so easily change his charecter. Please bear with this Maan .
 
Thanks a lot to all of you
--Anu
tellyme2011-11-07 16:24:42

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update soon... waiting for the part...

13 years ago

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13 years ago

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13 years ago

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13 years ago

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13 years ago

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13 years ago

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13 years ago

Beautiful story ... plz update soon.

13 years ago


hopefully maan will realises his love for geet soonwaiting for next partcontinue soon

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