Chapter 16

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recap:

    angad and kripa go out for dinner

now........

k: angad bakhi ke log kaha hey

a: oh kya hey na kripa main sirf tumhe invite kiya tha

k: kya? agahr sirf mujhe invite kiya, thab ye party kaisi hoghi

a: ye party nahin sirf tumhare sath ek acha sa dinner karne ka chance hey

k: ( all blushing) lekin tumne party bholkar kyun bhulaya

a: aghar main tumhe dinner par bhulavungha tho tum athi thi kya

k: puch kar tho dekh lethey

a: haan............. kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa???????????, kya aghar main tumne dinner par bholavungha tho athi thi

k: with a beautiful smile, haan

a: tik hey aghle bar (next time) bhol dungha

k: abb chale mujhe bhok lag rahi hey

a: chalo and angad leads her to a special room which is all dark

k: angad kyun a room pura dark hey

just then in the center of the room candles were lighted and in that candle light we see a smiling angad and a charming kripa near the door, angad nods his head to come , kripa goes and hugs him they both  hug and then angad kisses her on her lips and it turns to be a passionate kiss.

after like 10 minutes  angad's cell phone rings and they both seperate from the kiss, kripa's cheeks are now all red she is blushing.

a: under his breath, iss time pe kuan and checks his phone and its dilip, (thinking) dad aur iss waqt, vune tho flight main hona chahiye na 

and he lifts the phone 

a: hi dad, how are you 

di: iam fine beta tum na jaldhi se kripa ko lekhar ghar ajao 

a: (thinking) papa ko kaise patha ki kripa mere sath hey 

di: angad kya suna rahey ho mere bath, come fast 

before angad could speak anything dilip hangs up

k: kya huva angad kiska phoen tha

a: dad ka phone tha vunnone jaldhi hum dhono ko ghar ane keliye bhola hey 

k: maghar kyun 

a: path nahin , chalo chalthey hey 

k: chalo 

and they both drive to angad's home and sees that its all decorated and somany guests already arrived. angad and kripa enters and finds dilip talking with someone, angad goes near dilip

a: dad

di: oh angad agaye tum log kripa kaha hey

a: oh vaha hey mom ke sath and points in that direction

di: ok comeon you also enjoy the party beta

a: dad lekin party kis kushimain hey

di: abhi patha chalegha tumain

a: ok dad and he goes away from their to meet his friends misthy, prithvi and karthik

a: hey guys

mi,p,kk: hey angad

a: arey yaar atleast tum log tho bhol ye party hey kis kushi main

mi, p, kk(at the same time): patha chalegha dhiraj rakho

a: arey tum log bhi nahin bhol rahey ho

mi: arey anagd tum uthna gussa kyu hothey ho

a: whatever and he goes in look of aliya hoping atleast she can say whats going on

meanwhile aliya finds angad

aa: angad mujhe tumse kuch jarruri bath karni hey

a: mujhe bhi tumse kuch puchna hey , pehle tum bholo kya bath karni hey tumhe mujhse

aa: yaha pe nahin upper chalthey hey

a: chalo and both angad and aliya both go upstairs to angad's room

a: bholo aliya kya bath hey

aa: bhaya kya apne kripa ko propose kardhiye

a: nahin bus karne hi vala tha lekin papa ka phone agaya

aa: bhaya phir app propose nahin kare tho hi acha hey

a: kya bhol rahi ho aliya

aa: haan bhaya

a: lekin kyun

aa: oh issliye ki ............... aliya tells something to angad and wecan't hear it what we can see is angad's shocked face.

a: no it can't be true

aa: with tears in her eyes its true bhaya

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Comments (16)

hey angad kissed kripa but he did not propose? i thought kripa would understant that he luved her cont soon!!! luv mira

18 years ago

please con. soon your secret is killing me but i'm happy as u said that it won't be angad and mishty's engagement

18 years ago


no its not about angad and kripas engagement
luv &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; sweety

18 years ago

i read ur fanfic and its a awesome story,plz cont soon.

18 years ago


you need to wait till my next part which will be posted tomorrow
luv
sweety

18 years ago


dilip is not going to announce about angad and misthi's marriage, wait till my next part comes
luv
sweety

18 years ago

i want to know why anagd didn't propose krips.... i want to know the reson behind aliya tears... i want to know what happenn nexttttttt........ take care Laiba

18 years ago

thats wat i am thinking
cont soon yaar

luv mira

18 years ago

plz don't tell me that dilip has arranged Angad and Mishty's marriage please con. soon

18 years ago

noooo!! dnt end there.... jut giv me a clue, wts gna happn???? plz update quickly!! btw - the last 2 were amazing!!

18 years ago